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Thanks for the suggestion!

The empty boxes are transition panels, they're meant to be empty and not a dialogue box. Don't put anything in it. Break up (hypen) the...

You should make a reference document, where you will keep a list of names/family names/names of places/special terms/etc. Because you...

I already have one, i started it when i first started the 2nd ch. thanks for the suggestion though!

Indeed. I was already thinking "Okay, how long will they be dragging out the misunderstanding..." That alone gives me hope for the...

Just wanted to share my own remarks, but preface it also with statement that I don't have familiarity with the software involved with...

Nah, I get you. I only break the words up the way I do mostly because of space constraints. I do occasionally change up what the...

I think font not changing size would also make things looks more tidy, might try to choose one size

Aight, finally I found another mmc who's really sharp and not just "he's really sharp" and don't know a shit. (Sorry, but this type is...

Yeah i know, but because of the program i use, i don’t really have the luxury of being able to change the spacing. There are ways around...

I'd prefer not marking empty boxes with text. It breaks up the flow and just makes the reading feel messy. Still don't have a good...

To me, it seems like her and Travis are going to A) use the brothel to make Santal better than Clinted and B) to put Mirelda in her...

Thanks! I received a lot of helpful critiques on discord so hopefully the quality only continues to go up.

Quality TL

Thanks for the tl