What is that little trash pretending for he literally threw her and those poor other girls out...
Honestly the shift really feels off one sec slavery, torture and murder and then let forgive everyone for their sins and go on fluff adventures... this world needs someone to clean up the trash...
Mc still didn't get a reward for the event huh... and those debuff skills she picked did a serious number on her really hope there is a way to get rid of them... and for her to seriously invest some exp in her own stats... I don't think she ever did other than in the form of her skills...
@nerudo
@toruscans
@white_tiger_
@Blank
@katthekat
Excuse me, but rather than translating the sfx so oversized and damaging the art with them you should write them small somewhere with nothing... it would also spare you alot of time since you wouldn't even need to redraw = Profit 🤑
And...
Holy mandolin the amount of content that was cut out of this really hurts... this series deserves better...
Please stop rewriting and altering the text no more cutting sentence shorter or altering till they lose their sense... like for example page 12 : "-I thought I should show my gratitude...
And the disrespect and abuse continues huh... he will never get the respect he deserves or fight to grow stronger properly huh... has a level system yet doesn't try to get op...
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And yes again lots of liberal translation and rewrite... very very tiring... I don't even want to check...
*ERRORS
At page 4 she actually said: Please wait while I clean this. (Not: little guy, golden mess bullshit wtf is wrong with you? Please stop rewriting!)
So much rewrite... and so bad too you're ruining so many funny scenes and kill the jokes and replace them with half assed nonsense... for...
...I hate how the liberal the translation got... deleting details and rewriting sentences like this...
(Example fixes: I am amazed at your vitality despite being stabbed in the liver with this poison...)(Or the sentenc with party on page 10 was actually: You're a surprisingly interesting girl...
Come on dude you could just have mined deeeeeeeep underground for everything you need, in the first place it bothers me he didn't search even for diamonds yet...
Fucking beta idiot should never put all his stuff out... nor allowed others to walk over him... if only he hunted properly he would be already a much higher level and if he used alchemy properly he could already be stronger than anyone of them...