Kinda lazy writing tbh. I know it’s supposed to be a ‘gotcha’ moment when she’s talking to the countess, but the info dump kinda cratered all of that. Author didn’t set anything up or gradually dispense info, so they had to dump it all at once for this scene to make any sense, and that nuked any...
So she marched in, didn’t say anything she was supposed to despite having the opportunity, then got locked up again? Am I understanding that right?
The idea itself isn’t bad, but the execution here is… clumsy. A lot of people used a lot of words to say nothing of substance, and it feels like...
Oh. Wow. Who could have seen this coming.
Man I stg I wish we could have one of these stories that doesn’t involve other dudes trying to get the FL. It just weird how every single one I’ve read is like that. Like, why is the answer to “what obstacles must the FL overcome to be happy” somehow...
Lil bro’s ego couldn’t handle not being the main character, so he took the route of delayed MC-induced ego death. That’s a wild play, lets see if it pays off.
I hate it when I get story whiplash because the author put a flash-forward at the start of a story. Cmon man, how hard is it to put the beginning at the beginning?