Eiyuu to Majo no Tensei LoveCome

[UrAvgReader-v2]

Initial premise is good but the pacing of the story and characters are all over the place, author need to expand their horizons and learn to cook better..

 

[Guesto]

I like the story until ch 9, story become so much boring. 4/10

 

[national14578]

wtf is this fanservice

 

[Lord_Bogus]

I fail to see what interesting outcome this can have, what is the goal? The black haired witch lord girl had a condition and he could help her with it, they kissed in ch.1 but we are 13 chapters in and nothing has come from that yet

 

[TheLastSad]

ts might be peak???

 

[GhostX64]

If I had a nickel for every story that had flat chested girl as FMC and was trash one sided written story, I would be a billionaire today.

Also making the childhood friend fawn over him like that makes me question the credibility of writing ability of the author.

 

[uglywolf]

Spoiler: Anxiety after Ch 15

Preparing myself in case if any of them, is the a reincarnated Sage who planned Hero's execution.

If I'm given bucks for each people that one-sidedly complaints about each written stories, I could've been the top person giving humanity donations by today...

 

[Gerdinnyo]

It looks fine to good, but not quite my cup of tea, so I'll leave a rating and go. Hf

 

[Andasen]

I read the LN of this before i forgot what chapter i left at but this is good. I'm still waiting for Left The Going Home Club For A Girl With A Venomous Tongue to get a manga adaptation (unless I missed it entirely lol)

Peak taste

 

[RichardPercival]

Read all the way up to chapter 16.
Trash. Dropped. 1 star.
The MC is dense to the point of being an insensitive asshole, like he'd have to be ignoring the other girls on purpose, rather than (since in chapter 1 he describes himself as an adult who doesn't get carried away by their charms) just letting them down smoothly.
Despite the FMC being the witch who will clearly win, most chapters aren't dedicated to her. I think most of the time is spent with the busty superior childhood friend, which is just a waste of time since she doesn't have a chance of winning.
Also the reincarnation stuff adds nothing. It's generic harem slop where the reincarnation is just window dressing that only gets mentioned every so often. Not only does it add nothing, but it heavily takes away

Spoiler

from the childhood friend, who literally gets her body stolen by a dragon and is removed from the plot for a bit. Before the dragon thing is dropped and not brought up again.

 

[Demavend]

So I like this, but where's the comedy part of the romcom? Is that part of the title for dressing. Like I can't remember this being anything but serious.

 

[dexdoujinmanga]

The mc has a close male classmate sitting next to him on his right side seat, but only for 1 chapter on the very 1st chapter. We are also never told his name. If that's not a bad story writing, I don't know what is.