There's no cohesion at all.
He, you, and I... I don't think you're even using the right pronoun.
"You'll hear the story of me becoming a knight" ? ? ?
"I want you to become that kind of knight not bad" ? ? ? ? 🤔🤔🤔
Finally, progress.
Now I just need one character to grow a single functioning human brain cell and think "My assumption was wrong, tis but misundarstanding."
I forgot what the plot was.
There were tits sucking and foreplay, that for sure. Then it all blurred to me.
Oh, and the engagement was cancelled either way.
Cute/10