The line that says "I'm Dungan Slaver" should just say "...Dungan Slaver"
also why does it say "platy" did you mean "lately" or something?
otherwise, good job :thumbsup:
I like how you changed the fonts for certain tones, but the main font was a bit off of the one that most translators use (Wildwords); however I don't understand why people are calling itt atrocious.
The thing is that Yvonne in chapter 1 didn't experience any of this (you can tell because she doesn't know why Elsa likes her so much), so I think that Yvonne is going to be overwritten again by the same person, and it will be some sort of cycle?
I love how everyone here is just talking about the possiblity of yuri, really warms my heart. :thumbsup:
It's also nice to have more context for this, since it will stop all the complaining that people do about Elena's decision being to outlandish.