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And yet Phos is still a Frankenstein's monster of different minerals, yet this advice wasn't offered. In fact, this just seems to me like a move to remove one of Phos' best guardians. Never had a choice? So Ghost just told him to punch Phos several times when they first met? No, this guy just...

@Aricitic Oh, woops, I must have displaced the name with the comment because of the default images or something. My bad, I'll fix it now. As to your response, I had to go check because I thought Deadman Wonderland did have a gore warning in its description back on Batoto at least, but I guess...

@Aricitic "But what about"-ism is also a major problem in our world and you seem to be suffering from it. "They whipped me so much that I was bleeding a ton and even fainted, and were trying to do it more saying it wasn't enough!" "Yeah, I hear you, but what about the people who get their guts...

Shame on us if we don't know Evangelion but a JoJo reference in the same page and not a word? Shame on YOU scanlator!

I mean, she just makes up the imagery, the words are still his thoughts. That being said, that was relatively tame and fairly realistic. Well done, boy!

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@xyzzy You can be a pervert *and* want to help people. Those aren't mutually exclusive...Also, where'd you get fun? What I read was about making people feel better.

The twist for that second round was a little too obvious...The premise for the story isn't bad, but the author doesn't seem to be all that good at using it. Looking them up, they seem to be a newbie, so hopefully they get some good criticism in order to improve.

Kinda reminding me of Deadman Wonderland mixed with Animorphs.

This is a fun read, can't wait for the next update. Thanks @Phymiath!