The ending I’m hoping for: flash-forward to a future where they’re both happily married to someone else, but are still in each others’ lives and still love each other like family. Anything else would cheapen what they’ve accomplished together.
Lot more grammatical errors in this one.
I never really remember > should be > I don't really remember
My co-workers doesn't remember >> My co-workers don't remember
You were in a critical condition and they don't know what to do >> You were in a critical condition and they didn't know what to do
Well, son, you wanted to be seen as something more than just a dick, now it’s time to think with something other than your dick.
Good luck!
OH, and Thanks for the bulk translations!
I've long thought that Seto should be a teacher; interesting that he doesn't think he should. Because of overwhelming lack of self-confidence, or is there some other reason?