Please Don't Translate This Manga, Translator-san. Or at least proofread, or make it not seem like you either don't know Japanese or you're using Google Translate.
I should have expected that a spare megane wouldn't survive when one of the two main girls is a megane.. At least she went out like a champ taking that monster worm D in every hole.
Your redrawing on that last page isn't a huge issue (I didn't even notice it until I read your comment on the bottom of the page). I'm just happy someone is bothering to translate this.