Not just him, but damn near everyone. It's a cute story but the lack of any real progress in any route because none of them fuck off for even five minutes is starting to grate on the nerves.
The typesetting is fine, you just need a QC to catch all the spelling and grammatical errors. There's a lot of Random capitalized Words and some not-english-as-a-first-language type mishaps. Otherwise fine.
Honestly? It's pretty stupidly vanilla self-insert OP MC garbage? You have to read the comment threads in a bunch of the chaps to see why folks hate it. I didn't care one way or the other but as soon as it was popular to hate on it I got scared of being left behind and people lock me in lockers...
I mean, they're kind of hazing her by making her do this too.
I only noticed today that candyman's eyebrows grow out of holes in his head. This mascot has a lot going for him and he's relentlessly positive. Role-model material.
I think I misunderstood this as an OPMC fantasy when its a slapstick comedy with that as its genre instead.
Kind of liking the stupidity. It reminds me loosely of how one punch went, where nothing was a threat so we just got treated to humor instead.