A Girl Who Wants to Become a Zombie - Oneshot

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Not sure why but this made me laugh pretty hard
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@Katastrofa
Cute dark manga, and good job scanlating it! I've read (much) worse from native speakers! 😉

Quick&dirty PR:
p2 panel 2: I have full confidence in my chewiness! (alt: I can vouch for my chewiness!)
p2 last panel: and I was left all alone
p3 panel 1: By myself all this time...
p4 panel 1-2: I'm getting hungry
p4 panel 3: could bite me
p7 panel 3: the world isn't so sweet, is it?
p7 panel 4: you look very thin... Probably because you can't eat...

last panel: you're supposed to say: 'today, I wasn't turned into a zombie either' (and 'nor an English speaker')
...but honestly hardly anyone cares about too/either/neither anymore. The panel is fine as it is. 😁

If anything: have someone read your work one last time before uploading it. Half of the above are minor typos probably due to fatigue.
 
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I was all hyped for the "No, Little Girl, you are the zombies" end, but eh, this will also do.
 
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@abear
haha thank you!! tbh honest I kinda rushed it, probably shouldn't have. I can forgive myself for the translation mistakes (JP is hard), but the English is just awful lol. it got 2k views right now and it's 2k more than I expected... thanks for the feedback!
 
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Not quite sure how it works on here but the artist/author is already in the system as: Kobashiko
 
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@Hoomanadaw I have a feeling the toothless zombie would ignore her, like the better equipped zombies do, before actually accessing the open wound. Hunger might have made it try to bite the MC, but surely the smell of her blood would, at the very latest, tell the zombie the MC is no good.
 

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