A Normally Dowdy Man Is in Essence the Mightiest War-God - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[darekpawlo]

ngl this is pretty boring

 

[Akukean]

If I’m being honest the grammar is kind of terrible, it’s a little out of order in spots so I have to re-read sentences occasionally. But thanks for the work, don’t mean to sound like I’m complaining, I mean it more as constructive criticism.

 

[Gabe202]

Is it me or does his face feel weird ?

 

[Elandriel]

@Akukean Agree, it's not like I could even do this much, but it's a little distracting.

 

[Smilyfacething]

It’s a bit confusing but I’m enjoying it.

Thanks for the chapter!!🥰🥰

 

[Grimwear]

Compared to last chapter this is a great improvement. Which is a bit odd since 0 and 1 were fine, 2 was atrocious, and 3 is fine. There are a couple moments that maybe needed a bit of clarification (was the young girl saying she wants to date and marry our MC?) but overall much better. Nice work.

 

[vali007]

I've seen it in two chapters now there's always someone that looks like the shield hero.

 

[Chizan]

I really like the art, especially the character designs of the girls, reminds me a little of Gensou Gourmet. Now, if it just was paired with a good writer, perhaps it's just the manga adaptation mangling the source but so far the writing here doesn't exactly inspire hope...

 

[Banesephy]

Wtf this is so confusing. Who wants to marry who?