I reread the prior chapters that were also uploaded alongside this one and I prefer this translation despite the inversion of the names (family name first becoming given name first). It is bizarre that an indonesian group is better than the latin-american group at translation from japanese to english. Most American trucks are partly produced in Mexico and then this industry has shifted to Indonesia as a matter of price, to the detriment of the quality of the product. Many other industries have also followed this logic, Carhartt being an example.