Aoi-kun wa Mukimuki Kanojo wo Kouteishitai - Ch. 1.1

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Don't remember how I started following this, but it's cute so I'll stay.
 
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Thats the body of a man with boobs added on. Even the most muscular of women irl dont have shoulders that wide.
 
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Some parts of the translation was unfortunately very confusing. Hopefully it improves later on.
 
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Man, that translation was bad. I'd recommend having an English speaker on your team if you plan on translating to English.
 
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The story seems cute, but the translation is pretty rough. It’s not unintelligible but it hurts the flow and can make some parts confusing and require a re-read to understand. That said I’ve read and enjoyed worse translations.
 
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That was real fun, but please get someone to help you with proofreading, punctuation and grammar. There are a lot of mistakes.
Even so, doing a scanlation means a lot of work. Thank you translating this and sharing it with us! :hearts:
 
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We already replace the pages with the revision of our PR, you can finally enjoy this chapter.
 
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Thats the body of a man with boobs added on. Even the most muscular of women irl dont have shoulders that wide.
Nah, my mum did lawnmowing on hillside properties for 20 years, her shoulders and arms were exactly like that.
 
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You seem to be in the closet about something. Maybe get out and go see some real women instead of the ones in your strawman delusions.
Ive met many women throughout my life, not a single one ever looked like a male bodybuilder with tits. If you're into muscular women, you probably have an oedipus complex given your (made up) description of your 'mum'.
 
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Ive met many women throughout my life, not a single one ever looked like a male bodybuilder with tits. If you're into muscular women, you probably have an oedipus complex given your (made up) description of your 'mum'.
Yup, you're fucking delusional and have no actual reading comprehension. Have a good one ya slimey cunt.
 

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