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There is no extreme turmoil like Subaru has, but this one still has "something booming from within".
The sentiments of the character of this author are, to be honest, rather strange. Although the sensations are still well conveyed; the main character who wants to get out of the reality that encloses it, an irresistible expression.
What this heroine has in common with Subaru is, they have a sweet appearance but are strong enough to make it a stand-alone and strong character. The route taken in the development of their identity is also impressive, difficult to guess.

But the disappointment that I felt, I'm not too interested with freestyle rap, generally.
The spirit that is trying to be reached is quite ambiguous. And everyone will simultaneously bend their knees with something thrilling, just like that. Subaru v3.
This will be reinforced if there is a clear conflict just like Subaru being beaten and raised many times.
 

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