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Typical Chinese manhua with cultivation, pill refinement, and a bunch of women interested in the mc. The story, so far, has provided absolutely nothing new or interesting and the artwork isn't anything to write home about either. Just your standard quality of artwork found in manhua, average.
The thing that completely puts me off from this story more than anything else is the extremely "luke-warm"-and-cold translation quality. The word-choice and some dialogue doesn't fit the world the author has created and can be vastly different in one chapter compared to another. You will read more traditional Chinese manhua dialogue during a span of some chapters and then suddenly you will see the following: 'You boomer', 'mad tilted', and other garbage dialogue. There are other examples but I've since forgotten them as the story isn't memorable. Those words do not fit the world at all, and it isn't funny or creative.
If you are going to use modern slang, write a story where that language fits and could make sense.
The thing that completely puts me off from this story more than anything else is the extremely "luke-warm"-and-cold translation quality. The word-choice and some dialogue doesn't fit the world the author has created and can be vastly different in one chapter compared to another. You will read more traditional Chinese manhua dialogue during a span of some chapters and then suddenly you will see the following: 'You boomer', 'mad tilted', and other garbage dialogue. There are other examples but I've since forgotten them as the story isn't memorable. Those words do not fit the world at all, and it isn't funny or creative.
If you are going to use modern slang, write a story where that language fits and could make sense.