the translation seemed a little stiff, this time?
pg. 4 - "they're riding on impossible track" -> "they're riding on
an impossible track"
Pg. 9 - "It's for both us." -> "It's for both
of us."
Pg. 14 - "our job involves surveying signpost." -> "our job involves surveying signpost
s."
etc.
Thanks for the chapter, just give your script another read over next time to clean up any errors like these
