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SquigglesJP: Typos and other possible errors detected.
Page 2: "Rokobo" should be "Roboko".
Page 3: "panic" should be "panicked".
Page 7: The misspelled "fighto" looks out of place when it's paired with the correctly spelled "nice".
Page 8: "Ryuuchin and Kotatsu and also Torami
is doing a superb job that it makes me jealous of your department." It should be "are" rather than "is", and also "such" should be put after "doing" to make the sentence natural.
On a different note... I don't see the actual Kotatsu (as opposed to the drawn one on the walls and ceiling) in the last page.