Good work!
Lets compare to webnovel:
- This familiar is new. I'm glad it's not Nero, Nero's capture was a cool scene. I certainly hope it's not replacing Nero, this cat Kent can use for cuddling with girls, but not a flying date or shielding them from arrows with wind magic
Now that sounds interestinglizard woman familiar because of her... Voluptuousness...
Lets compare to webnovel:
Now that sounds interesting
I thought it seemed a little rushed, but I am used to the webnovel taking it's sweet ass time between main events. Perhaps it's over-correcting.As you know the source material, is the pacing off in the manga? It feels forced, somewhat, like they are cramming too much in, and jumping from scene to scene. Or is that just me needing to reread it again?
Well at least they still know their limit n not overbearing + MC inform them about the economy a little bit there...the girls demand money from him? sure he did promise to help them, but good lord they need to learn to control their shopping impulse.