Ijiranaide, Nagatoro-san - Vol. 3 Ch. 20 - Thanks, Senpai..

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Hmmm, I think the haiku's missing a syllable in the last line. 5-7-5.

Un-der burn-ing sun - 5
the con-ven-ience store ice cream - 7
is spe-cial too - 4

The feeling is more important, but I think Nagatoro could have ended with "is special as well" to make a perfect seventeen syllable poem
 
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Hmmm, I think the haiku's missing a syllable in the last line. 5-7-5.

Un-der burn-ing sun - 5
the con-ven-ience store ice cream - 7
is spe-cial too - 4

The feeling is more important, but I think Nagatoro could have ended with "is special as well" to make a perfect seventeen syllable poem
It might have the correct numbers in the original Japanese. Since "too" and "as well" are synonyms, I think this is more on the translator than on Nagatoro.
 

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