Ikari Shinji no Himegoto. - Ch. 12
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@Jobrothethird: Some minor corrections, since IIRC you're largely MTLing this from SEA and English isn't your first language.
page 3: While 子's most straightforward translation is "child", it's also often used in the "teenager" sense of "boy" or "girl", so in the context of this chapter's dialogue, it should be translated as "boy", or "kid" if gender neutrality due to Shinji's crossdressing is that important; "child" comes across as awkwardly formal and is too associated with "prepubescent".
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page 3: While 子's most straightforward translation is "child", it's also often used in the "teenager" sense of "boy" or "girl", so in the context of this chapter's dialogue, it should be translated as "boy", or "kid" if gender neutrality due to Shinji's crossdressing is that important; "child" comes across as awkwardly formal and is too associated with "prepubescent".
page 4:
- 2nd panel: "her" should be "his", since they know Shinji is male and he's just crossdressing rather than identifying as transgender.
- last panel: "whose" should be "who's".
