The last few pages had a bit of jank in the translation, but I'll still read this over the other guy. Thank you for the translation. Please don't be discouraged.
At least when you compare the two, this one can get the right pronouns of their characters while also not mistaking the girl's name as Io compared to it being Lo. Thank you for not dropping this & letting that scummy group get to you. Appreciate the translations like always.
Of this one? Yes I do & it doesn't have the stench of translating for the sake of making a profit. Most would prefer this over the other one if you can even call that a legible translation.