Kiraware <Kokuma Jutsushi> no Yarinaoshi

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This story is plagued with so many tiny little problems that slowly add up in a way that makes you realize the author truly does not care about his own story.
 
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just... below average story is just meh rushed doesn't make you feel anything for the characters not even a mild annoyance at how bad it is
it's rushed like the author was constantly under a deadline and the art is so generic
truly the epitome of "it exists i guess"
 
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I was fine with it, but with every chapter it becomes so apparent the author doesnt know what he is even writing about. It makes my blood boil. I wasnt logged into my account on my phone while reading this that i had to get up turn on my computer and write this comment level of mad. That petty feeling that grows withing you just in order to say damn the story is kinda dogshit. Like all the characters doesn't have any IQ whatsoever throughout my whole reading experience.

Pardon my language just had to get it off my chest.
 
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This story is dogshit, like bruh what is the MC doing 😭

Bro left his girl attended with only 1 arch demon.
The power scaling is everywhere. Like bros lvl 999 and adding onto his second class, he is still having a hard time against people.
 
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so you telling me,
this guy's at max level, has near-instant movement abilities that can carry multiple people over long distances, has a massive mp reserve that recovers fast as hell, and when the time critical moment of having to back to his girl before shit happens came, he decided to stroll his way through the forest at a casual walking pace and even stop to have a homemade meal at a random cabin he found along the way

?????????
 
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This shit is stupid. Ignoring all the basic tropes, which are honestly fine imo, I signed up for it. The MC dies like a simp because some rando wants his woman. Regresses to years before shit goes down with op stats/skills. Cool. Declares he'll never leave his woman again and the first thing this mf does is leave the woman to take care of the rando. Of course, while this shit is happening the woman runs off somewhere to do whatever the fuck (why not just stay put?) and gets abducted, like clockwork, because some other rando wants to marry her. At the same time, MC is just on a leisure trip with some new bitches, wholly unconcerned about whatever the fuck happened to the alleged waifu. Like bruh, what are we doing here...
 
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I was fine with it, but with every chapter it becomes so apparent the author doesnt know what he is even writing about. It makes my blood boil. I wasnt logged into my account on my phone while reading this that i had to get up turn on my computer and write this comment level of mad. That petty feeling that grows withing you just in order to say damn the story is kinda dogshit. Like all the characters doesn't have any IQ whatsoever throughout my whole reading experience.

Pardon my language just had to get it off my chest.
brother, you are the same as me. logged in just to vent lmao.
author is a retard of highest tier, should just delete himself to save us the trouble of reading his dogshit story.
 

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