Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Bakuen wo! - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Consult the Crimson Demon Clan's Greatest Genius About Your Problems!

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This is rather boring. The heroines can't even defend themselves. One of them is depicted as a total loser. There is no story to speak of.
When your readers want to get through the story so they can read the intermissions you've got a big problem.
 
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😔 poor guy, he's depressing me and this is a story with Yun Yun in it
 

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