Mizu Zokusei no Mahoutsukai - Ch. 16

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As i said in the last page, this chapter adaptation was awful, random panels in a page same with that one random speech bubble "dont forget to stay hydrated" lol wut I know the manga is called The Water Magician, so there is a focus on water but come on, that comment felt so random, although to be fair it was also on the web novel but it was attached to other stuff so it didnt feel as random. I dont know if this is the first manga the authors work on but it feels so extremely amateurish.
 
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thanks for the notes, I had no idea that it was hours of shooting. I thought the battle had only progressed like 10 to 15 minutes hence why I was thinking "those knights only brings 10 arrows or something?"
i almost didnt do the notes because there was so much missing and even then there was still more i didnt put down, just small exchanges between Abel and his group and more small details, i tried to only put down what i thought would add the most context.
 
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Thanks for the chapter. Also, no grammatical errors this time. Good job! Practice makes perfect.
 
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So.... Humans take an Arrow to the Knee. Goblins just have to one-up and take a Bow to the Shin..... check

It's CGI, so it must be true....:rolleyes:
 
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I generally don't like to poo-poo other people's efforts, but, really, this is bad:
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And yeah, why is there a bow coming out of the left goblin's leg? :wtf:
 

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