“Okaeri, Papa” - Ch. 21 - The Beach

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Well the obvious plan is revealed, as well as a partial justification: her mother wants another child but medically this may be difficult. That all was pretty easy to pick up. But there's still a lot we don't know; how did they find him, why does the mother want another child so badly, what sort of medical issue is she dealing with, is the end goal a family or for them to get a child and then leave without a trace...

There's a lot to know. But this is a significant step because the plan has been revealed to him. It's particularly interesting because it comes while he's still with his mom and sister, so there's room for him to turn back. He can realize that they were right, this isn't the horror ending where after he's moved in with them in a small cabin far away without internet or phone access they spring their plan on him. It's a heavy story beat that landed while he still has a lot of agency.
 
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The suspense is killing me. Really can't wait to see how this crashes.:worry:
 
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Jesus, dude. For all intents and purposes you just had sex with your hot wife. It wasn’t even creepy (as far as you knew), but you still wake up hemming and hawing about bullshit and fretting like a woman. At this point it’s not being considerate, it’s just being a pain.

No wonder they marked you for nefarious deeds… Which I guess is setting the daughter up with stability before she passes?
 
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At this point, his sister HAS to think he banged the daughter, right? Her reaction would be way too stupid if she understood it was a married couple having sex.

Also, let the daughter cook. The food is not yet burned
Nah, sis is slightly more worldly (and probably pregnant with an NTR baby). It’s not the sex part, its just that she feels something shady’s going on... Also the daughter watching. Can’t forget about that part….
 
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I'm wondering how the author will resolve the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter. Will Touko simply get up and leave? Will Chika walk past her, pretending not to notice? If Chika weren't bound by manga conventions, she'd probably react reasonably and shout, "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!" However, given she is a manga character, I have no idea what the author has planned for this situation.

Thanks for the chapter!
So the author took the easy way out, with Chika having fuzzy memory due to the shock of what she saw. I expected more.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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Smart move, the plausible deniability.
Testing the waters, trying to plant the seed of that idea in his mind, while still putting the "innocent daughter" front.
Is it a natural talent, or did her mom teach her how to best manipulate people?
 
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"grandchildren would indeed be kinda neat, haha. but i think its a little early for you to think about that"

problem solved
 
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Fuck the police, this should end with both mom and daughter pregnant.
 
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I think the mother and daughter gonna kill him after getting his seed
 
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"HIROTO DON'T LISTEN TO THEM"
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That girl is such a WEIRDO it’s insane
Nah i f with it. We need this sussy drama. I NEED TRASH TO CONSUME AFTER FINISHING DOME X KANO lmao. Nah but fr, this makes it more interesting (for me). W writer
 

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