Ossan Teihen Chiyu-shi to Manasume no Henkyou Life - Vol. 2 Ch. 10 - New Family

[MangaDex]

 

[Desuka]

Cute and funny daughterwife GET! 😭

 

[Mangamoz]

I respectfully recommend that you reread the chapter again @Sanjog_Rai

You missed a lot of typos and mistakes.

I assume that you were just very excited about the new waifu being added.

 

[not_yamato]

What even was that fight.

 

[T-sama]

Damn, Reda gonna propose to every unsupervised loli he finds, what a fucking chad

And with this we have 3 daughter-wife, I wonder how many he'll catch

 

[jhs_reika]

MC: You're also my family, Luna-chan!

MC: Call it whatever you want! I'll make you happy too! Lets become a family! Luna!

DEFINITELY NOT A DAUGHTER.

 

[Sanjog_Rai]

I respectfully recommend that you reread the chapter again @Sanjog_Rai

You missed a lot of typos and mistakes.

I assume that you were just very excited about the new waifu being added.

hmm, can you show me the errors? I checked but it was quite okay to me (leaving aside my strange grammar and one place where there is no "space")

 

[pandatime]

You know thinking about it is kinda a sad thing since Mina did run since if shes not there as a hostage Mina naiveily believed her sister could escape. Good thing their reunited again

 

[Mangamoz]

hmm, can you show me the errors? I checked but it was quite okay to me (leaving aside my strange grammar and one place where there is no "space")

Is english not your native language perhaps?

Well, anyway, here are some of the more obvious examples I could find.

pg1 "And I was forced to use my skill to _____ many people every day"(Is this meant to be heal many people?)

pg18 "Even though you left be behind"(Should be me)

There are more than this, but it would require me to rewrite most of the pages all over again here in the comments.

If english is not your specialty, I recommend you use english auto correct to help you with grammar and typos.

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

Could it be that we will reach a point where he will smash his lolis?!?!??

 

[T-sama]

Could it be that we will reach a point where he will smash his lolis?!?!??

3 vs 1? I don't think he's the one doing the smashing

 

[Sanjog_Rai]

Is english not your native language perhaps?

Well, anyway, here are some of the more obvious examples I could find.

pg1 "And I was forced to use my skill to _____ many people every day"(Is this meant to be heal many people?)

pg18 "Even though you left be behind"(Should be me)

There are more than this, but it would require me to rewrite most of the pages all over again here in the comments.

If english is not your specialty, I recommend you use english auto correct to help you with grammar and typos.

about the page 1
she's not healing anyone
she's just using her skills on others (yea i should've used a better preposition ig)
yea the second one is a typo
and yeah
i'm not a native english speaker

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

3 vs 1? I don't think he's the one doing the smashing

Don't underestimate adults 💢💢💢, he does have the buff so i'm sure it will be fine.

 

[hikazama]

Am I mistaken for expecting Luna's head to fly or her heart to be run through while she was crying on page 32? That was totally a flag.

 

[ciera]

Thank you very much

 

[MEBWizz]

I respectfully recommend that you reread the chapter again @Sanjog_Rai

You missed a lot of typos and mistakes.

I assume that you were just very excited about the new waifu being added.

hmm, can you show me the errors? I checked but it was quite okay to me (leaving aside my strange grammar and one place where there is no "space")

Is english not your native language perhaps?

Well, anyway, here are some of the more obvious examples I could find.

pg1 "And I was forced to use my skill to _____ many people every day"(Is this meant to be heal many people?)

pg18 "Even though you left be behind"(Should be me)

There are more than this, but it would require me to rewrite most of the pages all over again here in the comments.

If english is not your specialty, I recommend you use english auto correct to help you with grammar and typos.

about the page 1
she's not healing anyone
she's just using her skills on others (yea i should've used a better preposition ig)
yea the second one is a typo
and yeah
i'm not a native english speaker

There is a program you can download for free called Grammarly it is a free AI writing tool that will help with your writing in English. I have the link below. It will underline in blue if there is a grammatical error and red if a typo. It always runs in the background and will help with all your writing in English needs (i.e. emails, translations, and blogs).

https://www.grammarly.com/?msockid=2bc80003042969d33ed71424052e6804

 

[chendu]

Tanks for the food

 

[Jakeh24]

There is a program you can download for free called Grammarly it is a free AI writing tool that will help with your writing in English. I have the link below. It will underline in blue if there is a grammatical error and red if a typo. It always runs in the background and will help with all your writing in English needs (i.e. emails, translations, and blogs).

https://www.grammarly.com/?msockid=2bc80003042969d33ed71424052e6804

Only thing I will say about grammarly, or any grammar correction tool is; be careful not to rely on it as they make just as many mistakes as people. They miss nuances and change things that don't need changing at times

 

[Eezyville]

Assassin loli acquired!

 

[Rayla89]

Assassin loli, get