Otoko Girai na Bijin Shimai wo Namae mo Tsugezu ni Tasuketara Ittai Dounaru? - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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To think, we were so close from getting Oyakodon Shimaidon rape. Ah, maybe some other time.

At least, according to spoilers that is,
he gets the sisters and mom falling for him, so that's still an Oyakodon Shimaidon combo, just no rape.

Thanks for the TL btw
even the mother? Wow.. just.. wow 😏😏
 
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Honestly, there is one very simple question authors should ask themselves before writing a character. If anyone who reads this comment ever thinks about writing a story, just remember this:
"Would I?"
So, "would I decide to offer my whole life and being to a person who saved me from being raped/killed, and never, ever go back on that intention?"
Probably not.
 
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"We hate men"
"This guy saved us"
"We must debase ourselves and become his slaves"

Wat?
I also agree that it’s shit writing, but with some reframing, it might work.

It could be that to them, “all men are trash” compared to their father, so someone who reminds them of their father is no longer considered trash.
 
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mc disguising himself was the best possible move, and he didn't even realize it lmao
 
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This is so garbage I must read more, also the art for the eyes in some panels makes them look like they have alcohol fetal syndrome lol
 
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HIS SCENT????? very VERY big BIG BIGGGGG RED FLAG

My brother is gonna die
 

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