Parasol Alliance - Oneshot

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Well, I kinda expect this to happened. If they happened to pick this up and make a series, it's either gonna be about how the MC found out the girl like him or how will she handle being rival with her sister....

Still, the art is very good, 7/10
 
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Saw the twist coming a mile away but it was still cute.

I'm happy with it staying a oneshot though. Stuff like this gets ruined if you serialize it, as they try to drag out the story by adding pointless rival characters, more misunderstandings, etc. etc.
 
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@Kevadu Agreed. If it did get serialized, that’s most likely exactly what would happen. It sucks when you actually really want a oneshot to be serialized, and then when it does, it turns into something completely different. There was this oneshot with this gyaru that I real liked, but when it got serialized, it turned into a harem when nothing in the oneshot suggested that it would be a harem.
 
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I don't want a serialization. But I want second chapter. Make it be final one. About how Yuzu confesses to Haru. I want to see those two too. This might be interesting. And depending of Haru's response it could lead to different kinds of chaos. But all of them could be interesting.
 
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I feel like I have seen at least 10 oneshots with the exact same plot, excluding the twin part. Even Toradora had something similar in its story.
 
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Ok, that was awesome. Hopefully this gets serialized, I love the dynamic between the MC and the girls.
 
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I dont know how this would work if its serialised because it would be weird for her to keep supporting him after confessing
 
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As far as I'm concerned, she deserved getting dumped. She lied to the dude. She blackmailed him. She made him dress up as his brother. She had it coming and I don't feel sorry for her in the least.
 
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Feel depressed with the ending,I quiet happy when karin confess to ten,but it turns out that ten just reject her and the ending turn into a cliffhanger instead of happy ending...sh*te
 

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