Ping Dan's Inflatable Doll: Zoe-17 - Ch. 3

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Gotta be some kind of shameless to have a lock screen like that lol.
 
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i fucking hate when noobs write a story with a story, fuck off.
 
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@Meybi

lol I can see where you are coming from...

what I mean is, when authors make the first chapter the main story right, then after that is a story about how the MC got to that main story... do you know what I mean? like use the hook for first chapter then fuck all and do another story from there on how we got there.
 

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