she's cute but a little too Mary Sue, even in these types of stories. like does she HAVE to be a morally upright, kind, caring person through and through? I wouldn't even mind but her only flaw is sooo paper flimsy. she thinks she's being a bad person when she's being a good one. wow how humble and innocent of her. I wish she could have actual flaws instead of something so obviously put there to be one. and why is the Prince's name Duke????? that is so weird lmao. sounds like Prince Lower Noble to me, might as well name him Prince Prince at this point 😂 thanks for the chapter!
To me it's annoying because you could definitely create a character who was a morally upright, kind, caring person who was also unmistakably a villainess?
Would be a good way to create a character who would be a good queen in a way that a lot of shoujo heroines are not.
Good queen: can work with snooty but powerful aristocrats
Shoujo heroine: offends most of them with idealistic speeches*
Good Queen: knows how to develop and delegate work to subordinates
Shoujo heroine: tries to do everything herself*
Good queen: Can make tough decisions
Shoujo heroine: always wants to save or forgive people
Good Queen: high emotional intelligence, great at reading people
Shoujo heroine: completely oblivious, maybe assumes everyone is acting based on something only she knows/cares about*
A lot of the good queen traits pair well with a rich aristocratic girl.
* Looking at you MC