Samayoeru Tensei-sha-tachi no Relive Game - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The Silver Houkousha

[MangaDex]

 

[Lee-Nyan]

So I made some translation changes,fixed some typos and now we have a compiled Chapter 1! As soon as Mai gets back from his vacation he'll be able to delete Chapter 1.2 form MangaDex

 

[1234muse]

soooo this is interesting, but all our comments are gone....

 

[Impro46]

Wow.. Nice manga.. Like re zero concept.. Revive

 

[Lee-Nyan]

@1234muse It saddens me too, those comments were awesome, but I felt the readability of the manga was important enough to justify the change.

 

[GabrielH]

it's better like this

 

[MarqFJA87]

@Lee-Nyan: Say, on page 28... Is "Matte! Matte!! Stop!" supposed to be a literal rendering of the actual Japanese, i. e. at first Japanese "matte" then ending with "stop" as an English loanword?

Also, page 70 misspells "Waristnelia" as "Walistoneria".

 

[Swordnoob16]

Is this dark souls

 

[radegor]

Too bad the previous comments were lost, but thanks for the hard work!

 

[Nick86]

Thanks for the fix, was fun read it again. <3

 

[Lee-Nyan]

@MarqFJA87 yes exactly matte matte sutoppu
Also thanks I’ll fix it when I get home tomorrow

 

[MarqFJA87]

@Lee-Nyan: I suppose there is no other way to translate that sentence, aside from "inverting" it (i.e. "Stop! Stop!! Matte!").

That said, I really hope the next time such a "compile split chapters for cohesion" occurrence happens, someone would screenshot each chapter's discussion thread's posts before deleting them, and compile the screenshots into an imgur gallery that would then be linked to in the new thread.

 

[jasty]

Just translate it to Stop Stop Stop

The stop is only in English for emphasis. People don't emphasize English words by speaking Japanese

 

[Simkin]

Wow, getting isekai'd into Dark Souls.

Tough break.

 

[lilmagi]

nvm

 

[Xzayer]

That backstab. “Welcome to dark souls”

 

[CrysisWar1234]

@MarqFJA87 Matte is supposed to mean "wait."

 

[MarqFJA87]

@CrysisWar1234: I already knew that, as should've been implied by me not even asking the translator what it means.

 

[GenericSideCharacter]

Oh wow there's even a FireFlowerkeeper to help the bearer of the curse after they revive

 

[Amatsukaze_KaiNi]

Dark Souls but with a touch of anime and genderswap Imo...