Shinigami ni Sodaterareta Shoujo wa Shikkoku no Tsurugi wo Mune ni Idaku - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The Girl Raised by Death.

[0neDragon]

her personality is interesting ,I allready like her

 

[ma_ko]

Eh, i'm not that fond of female MCs but lete's see how it goes

 

[petra_lal]

なにせ一般人の女は殺さねぇ
殺させねぇって俺のルールを破らせた初めての女の名だ

犯した数なら数えきれねえが

That's the Japanese for the bubbles in question @RandomGuy2307 I think something better might be:
'Anyway, I'm going to kill an ordinary girl. If I kill her it'd be the first time I break my rule of not killing women' said aloud
'Well if it's the number I've raped it's uncountable' his inner thoughts

It was a one off bubble so it's not too important but 犯した is a word for rape.

 

[soulnight114]

Interesting enough premise, will give this a few chapters and see where it goes.

The fact that it isn't another isekai with a male mc building a harem in the first chapter is a plus.

 

[MCX01]

What the fuck did I just watch?!

 

[Reimos]

So, death itself raised a psychotic girl, taught her nothing other than how to slaughter and then skedaddled?
Sounds fun.

 

[Tych]

damn she is a simple girl

 

[RandomGuy2307]

@petra_lal I was talking about the inner thought bubble. The spoken (and relatively more important) one is very clear.
As you said, it is ultimately not important (I highly doubt we will see this character again), but since you asked for feedback, I felt it was worth mentioning. If no one has any complaints about what you did, it must have been a good job (at least, that's how it seems to me).

This MC kind of reminds me of Shera from “The Girl Who Ate a Death God”, but less violent and without the hunger.

 

[WhimsiCat]

@petra_lal : No, it's the opposite

He's thinking that normally he doesn't kill normal women, in this case referring to non-combatants.
The second part is him recognizing "Olivia" is the name of the woman who make him break that rule for the first time.
And yes 3rd part is that if it's rape he's done countless times...

The ねぇ here is informal ない, not the cutesy ねぇ~ someone might end their sentence in.

 

[martinren123]

Uhm. Im gonna say shes innocent but i feel like she's gonna be one of those floaty airheads lol

 

[ivv]

she soooo cute!

 

[jimmyclear]

Kiddo, your adopted father taught you well.

 

[ultraleaf]

neat

 

[DumplingDalu]

She is like those Naive monster’s that after they kill thousands of people they just laugh it off.

 

[Darris]

These fight scenes are really bad...was she breakdancing with those soldiers?

 

[shyevsa]

What a wonderful smile... I am in.

 

[Taco-chan]

"plus she's cute, except for the decapitation"
What are you talking about? That's the best part😏

 

[aberdeus]

this is pretty cool i thought it was gonna bbe some edgyboi that parties up with the girl,nope girl is main protag

 

[petra_lal]

Thanks @WhimsiCat I haven't learned a lot of the informal or abbreviated forms so the way he was talking confused me.

 

[Yourself]

Dman she's ruthless. The guards were pretty dumb to continue after that.