The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way - Ch. 5 - Making my cheeky gal sister understand christmas

[BuyVelomobiles]

In that case, it seems to me it implies the brother knew his sister is getting action even prior to Day 0, why else would he employ precisely "dirty slut"

Yes. Gyaru have a reputation for their style, but also their sexual promiscuity. The author isn't trying to reinvent the wheel here: The sister is, in fact, a called a dirty Dirty Gyaru Slut right at the start. Then the "Cheeky" translation was for ”生意気” (Which came later in the page), but the furigana (The thing that tells you how to read the kanji) actually still read "Dirty slut"; meaning that he said one thing, but the story clarified that he meant the other. Let no one tell you this is her first time getting railed at a drinking party.

On NSFW Day 1 the guys were joking about the step brother getting aroused by her, I wonder if that is author's way to nod on the "scrapped" chapter.

That, and probably a way to clarify, for TOS reasons, that there's been a retcon, and that they're not related now. Unfortunately, it turned the GB into NTR too.

 

[Litreara]

But you're saying that the mangaka should do this... for a Pixiv comic. A Pixiv comic where chapters are anywhere from one to five pages, at that.

Whatever man. I don't know why it bothered you so much that I said that the author needs help with her writing and maybe an editor would be an idea. I didn't say should as an imperative, I said it as a suggestion.

 

[Eighty-six]

Whatever man. I don't know why it bothered you so much that I said that the author needs help with her writing and maybe an editor would be an idea.

It's not that it bothers me-- it's that the suggestion comes off as an outsized and inappropriate expenditure for a Pixiv comic, talk less of one that's Fanbox bait.

"The characters and plot are bad" Why does that matter in regards to the authorial purposes of the comic, monetary or otherwise? Any money you spend on what's actually being sold will be to access material that won't require you to think about over any of those things.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

. He even described her as weak to pressuring in his thoughts, and I assume he was mocking her with "What a poor girl", since he had no problem exploiting her.

Brother, you won't fucking believe this: That line is the narrator. The translator fucked up a whole two lines in just the first page. Every chapter square dialogue box is the story describing the sister from an objective narrator POV. I'm fixing it all as we speak.
She was described as a "Convenient gyaru" (As in, she's only called when someone wants something from her), and she had actually asked him to bring what she was looking for to her, instead of her going inside.

 

[gletto]

4.91... we can go lower!!!!!!!

 

[AnotherRat]

Sex doko

 

[BakedBanana]

Is the reindeer the MC? He looks great, I guess good looks runs in the family.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

The main reason she was Santa:

Turns out that was a translator fuckup. She never suggested anything about him in that line. She was expressing doubt about her own suitability alone; the implication being that another woman take the role.

 

[Littlepikachu13]

Nah, the author doesn't feel bad. They are continuing this series when they should drop it because the controversy is getting them money and attention. Their view of women is gross honestly as I'm trying to read it from the comfy lense they are trying to pass it off as now. I really can't tell what the sister did wrong that she needs "serious correcting" anyways (because the focus of this wasn't meant to be any true personality things, it was to make fan box bait of drunk gyaru). She dressed to sexy and went out to drink? I guess the worst is the cursing. I can't feel fluffy reading it when it's just her brother shaming her for dressing bad, it's got this nasty tone of she deserved what happened to her despite the author trying to make it a happy story. This is besides knowing what happened with the fan box shit. Can't go back from that. I'm just reading it cuz it's free and I want to see more of this trash pretending to be comfy, it's the manga equivalent of kimchi in milk

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

I really can't tell what the sister did wrong that she needs "serious correcting"

She's a slut, yo.

I can't feel fluffy reading it when it's just her brother shaming her for dressing bad,

He's telling her he's worried.

it's got this nasty tone of she deserved what happened to her despite the author trying to make it a happy story.

Nothing bad happened, other than her being a slut. There's nothing to "Deserve".

 

[Littlepikachu13]

She's a slut, yo.

He's telling her he's worried.

Nothing bad happened, other than her being a slut. There's nothing to "Deserve".

Lol, let a girl dress skimpy, she apparently wasn't active other than drinking til she couldn't do anything, brother acts more dangerous. We all know what happened in the fan box shit, brother has no concern for her wellbeing. Author tried to keep his threatening tone but put in somewhat nice behavior, but it's like covering shit with a flower. But if we are going to read it like we are ignoring that, he does barely anything with weird dead eyes and fucked thoughts. And with the way the author rewrote it, yeah, something bad happens to her.
We are arguing over trash anyways that the author is pumping for more money, it's badly written porn and badly written comfy. Though it is funny he is complementing her santa outfit in this one, it's more skimpy than what she went out in. Is it that japanese thing about exposing your stomach you will get a cold? Is this authors cover up for the fan box that what she "deserved" was a cold for showing her tummy? It's pretty funny in a bad fan fic way

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Lol, let a girl dress skimpy, she apparently wasn't active other than drinking til she couldn't do anything, brother acts more dangerous.

What's your first language? I might be able to understand that one better.

We all know what happened in the fan box shit, brother has no concern for her wellbeing. Author tried to keep his threatening tone but put in somewhat nice behavior, but it's like covering shit with a flower.

No, seriously, what are you saying? What does an NTR gangbang have to do with her brother?

But if we are going to read it like we are ignoring that, he does barely anything with weird dead eyes and fucked thoughts. And with the way the author rewrote it, yeah, something bad happens to her.

????

Though it is funny he is complementing her santa outfit in this one, it's more skimpy than what she went out in.

A) The outfit covers way more.
B) Going out dressed for a children's party in the middle of the day is not the same as going out dressed like a whore, in the middle of the night.

Is this authors cover up for the fan box that what she "deserved" was a cold for showing her tummy? It's pretty funny in a bad fan fic way

"Deserve" what? That's not even a word that applies here.

 

[Outflanks10]

Thanks everyone at Ecchi No Doujinshi ScansSnow_Snow for the translation and have a happy new year.

 

[JustAU-]

I don't like the look in his eyes at all it's too dark

 

[popo53414]

oh

 

[JustSomeGuyOnHisPhone]

Good feels

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Good feels

I see you didn't read the fanbox. Or Chapter 4.

 

[UlysUlysUlys]

It's sort of odd that people are arguing that she wasn't black out drunk when she's literally shown waking up at her door, like it's quite obvious that was the entire point of that scene.

 

[Eighty-six]

It's sort of odd that people are arguing that she wasn't black out drunk when she's literally shown waking up at her door, like it's quite obvious that was the entire point of that scene.

You're not aware of the Fanbox content.

 

[Shygig]

I feel like this is gonna go an incest route. I hope not, but you never know

unironically better than the alternative

at least there's love and consent there