Can you quit it with the "yurifag this," "yurifag that"? It's getting annoying, it's immature, and at this point it signifies nothing beyond your own contempt for another section of the fanbase.
(Personally, I didn't think the writing was remarkably bad. Some hiccups and an arguable failure to strike exactly the right note with the ending, overall left hanging like a sort of incomplete thought, as is the fate of many oneshots. But with some vague merits towards atmospheric writing to make up for it. No masterpiece by any means, but certainly not awful.)
@Pokari
Probably not. I feel very strong disdain for what "fanbase" currently is (and, if ds forum older threads are anything to go by, been at least for the past decade).
what the hell this is so cute!! i need more from this author, preferably with the presence of full-on romance, but getting a confession in a oneshot is still a pretty good enough meal