Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 11 Ch. 2 - I Got Dumped, So I Stole My Ex-Fiance's Fiancee!?

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Huh. This one seems very targeted. If you're into the end goal of "Yep, crossdressing!" or that specific brand of revenge, I could see enjoying this. But outside of that, it's very generic. Between the classic, "He didn't like you, but you'll look better after a makeover!" trope, and the random use of a reincarnation that has absolutely no relevance on the plot, combined with your 'revenge' being 'go after someone who was willing to help cheat on you'...

This isn't bad, but if you're not into the tastes that this is trying to serve, it doesn't really have much going for it, either.
 
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This was fun! Solid art and I like the inversion of the trope where it takes the denouncement to actually turn her to a "villainesses.". Also nice to see the replacement fiance/transmigrator as not a eeeevil biatch for once.

Could be a solid setting for an actual series once the characters are fleshed out a bit :thumbsup:
 
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This was below meh. I don't see how you could criticize other stories as bad for being rushed and having undeveloped non-sense points when this was also absolutely rushed and had undeveloped non-sense points. Like the damned reincarnation that does literally nothing. You could remove that and the story wouldn't have changed one single bit except for being even shorter.
You would only like this if you like crossdressing. That's literally it.

It does have potential as a comedy concept. The duchess is a PIMP picking up dumped chicks for her hostess bar.
 
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This was below meh. I don't see how you could criticize other stories as bad for being rushed and having undeveloped non-sense points when this was also absolutely rushed and had undeveloped non-sense points. Like the damned reincarnation that does literally nothing. You could remove that and the story wouldn't have changed one single bit except for being even shorter.
You would only like this if you like crossdressing. That's literally it.

It does have potential as a comedy concept. The duchess is a PIMP picking up dumped chicks for her hostess bar.
Yeah a lot of these could have removed the reincarnation stuff and it would be the exact same.
 
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I love the art a lot, but the story does need a little work.

I would have loved to see the MC rolling up to events and charming everyone, including her ex while crossdressing. I assume the reincarnation plot point was purely because the author didn't want the heroine to be treated like a bad person
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