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Just to suffer..........

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I had to refresh 10 times the page and wait minutes for the OS to charge itself I HATE J+ FIX YOUR SHIT SHUEISHA
 
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Cool idea but really has nothing to go on beside that one scene ,probably build around it instead leading to it. Feels like a teenager writing their big realisation “world is cruel,man” deep edgy philosophy thing,but very meh to adult.

Who am I kidding?At least the guy is productive enough to pull off drawing a full one shot than me who can only shitpost on forums. Guy has potential,art is great, very shonen jump-ey,needs a good editor to polish him
 
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I'd like to see that device in the hands of someone without the moral dilemma. With the added limitation of not being able to stop time indefinitely.

Anyways, this was pretty good.
 
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This one has the potential of being adapted to a series. shit the amount you could write to with this scenario is staggering but the niche is there for a short series.
 

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