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Despite being an interesting premise, the story is poorly written and all of the characters are major POS.
First off, Est was a white/support mage meaning no real offensive ability, their formation should have had a vanguard and rearguard that would have protected support roles. If they had done this, Est wouldn't have been injured in the first place.
Second, Athena had no tact when it came to expelling her 'best-friend"/childhood friend and a founding member of the party. A little honesty and genuine concern probably would have been better understood from someone considered a friend than the let's be really cruel to make sure he leaves. Then once things start going bad for them they don't reflect on how much Est really was doing for them since forever.
The elf character is just selfish and forgettable whose only reason to kick Est out was so she would have a better opportunity to spark a yuri romance between her and Athena.
Est remained obsessive with his former party long after awakening his powers and being a solid solo adventurer and creating his own successful party.
Finally, Daru the biggest POS of them all. He hides his true power which goes back to the vanguard/rearguard issue. He has the experience but doesn't use it to benefit the party until the girls are in trouble which now makes him the hero when he should be chastised for not bringing it up sooner. If he had taken the time he could have worked with Est and trained him to be in a better position to defend himself while still performing his support role. He does as little as possible to clear up the multiple misunderstandings with Est justifying it as Est has chosen to be angry but then goes out of his way to profess his belief in her in a intimate speech an action he certaintly didn't take to prevent Est from being kicked out. His actions speak way louder than his words and it seems like he will gladly accept his role as the head of a harem.
Since this is listed as complete, I'm going to finish reading it as the traslations come out, but unless a miracle happens, I can undestand the rating this has and the criticisms I've seen here.
First off, Est was a white/support mage meaning no real offensive ability, their formation should have had a vanguard and rearguard that would have protected support roles. If they had done this, Est wouldn't have been injured in the first place.
Second, Athena had no tact when it came to expelling her 'best-friend"/childhood friend and a founding member of the party. A little honesty and genuine concern probably would have been better understood from someone considered a friend than the let's be really cruel to make sure he leaves. Then once things start going bad for them they don't reflect on how much Est really was doing for them since forever.
The elf character is just selfish and forgettable whose only reason to kick Est out was so she would have a better opportunity to spark a yuri romance between her and Athena.
Est remained obsessive with his former party long after awakening his powers and being a solid solo adventurer and creating his own successful party.
Finally, Daru the biggest POS of them all. He hides his true power which goes back to the vanguard/rearguard issue. He has the experience but doesn't use it to benefit the party until the girls are in trouble which now makes him the hero when he should be chastised for not bringing it up sooner. If he had taken the time he could have worked with Est and trained him to be in a better position to defend himself while still performing his support role. He does as little as possible to clear up the multiple misunderstandings with Est justifying it as Est has chosen to be angry but then goes out of his way to profess his belief in her in a intimate speech an action he certaintly didn't take to prevent Est from being kicked out. His actions speak way louder than his words and it seems like he will gladly accept his role as the head of a harem.
Since this is listed as complete, I'm going to finish reading it as the traslations come out, but unless a miracle happens, I can undestand the rating this has and the criticisms I've seen here.