Jinsei Gyakuten - Uwaki sare, Enzai wo Kiserareta Ore ga, Gakuen Ichi no Bishoujo ni Natsukareru - Ch. 1

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I'm sorry but this is still poor narrative pacing.
You must be new to the concept of filler episodes then, when something is successful not only the author will want to extend it but the publishers and anyone involved who might see profit
 
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While a timeline is never stated (or I missed it), it feels like it was a month or two before the affair really started, and then they may have carried on for a month before being caught. It wasn't just in one week. I think it makes the betrayal a bit worse since she lied about it for so long.

Also, it doesn't seem to me like sex was as big a factor. A factor, but not the factor. Her character definitely has more depth than that. It was more emotional, helped by Kondo spoon-feeding her easy outs and stroking her ego.
it felt more like they did have sex all the time and he asked that in the bed too. so it seemed like she still wants him as boyfriend but cant give up sex so she turned into a pet? well even if its not like that since she choose to stay silent about him not being abusive which almost made him sui himself at the rooftop just bc she didnt want to get bullied instead, shows that she is unsaveable. bc thats not random guy you dated that was your 10 years childhood friend you probably know his family too, like wtf. also i got spoilers from wn readers and i dont like how it goes too bc late help doesnt mean anything to me.
 
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I couldn’t help but read the novel ahead but does anyone know what my goat endo looks like. Bros single handily doing his best to avenge mc lmao.
 
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Thank you for translating, may NTR lovers go straight to hell

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Bro..
Trust a woman to help cover that cheating was happening. his mother knew and didn't say shit?
 
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Okay, I read all the spoilers and it is indeed steaming hot garbage. The closest I can come to describing it is that visceral first reaction some of us got the first time we came across a NTR story/plot. The unfairness and cruelty of it can hit like a truck, especially to a teenager/young adult.

As we have seen in some comments, it can legit create some trust issues and make for some emotionally stunted people (guys especially, but do not underestimate how this shit can affect us ladies). Speaking of, while the average NTR doujin is completely braindead in terms of stories, you would be surprised to learn how depraved things can get in real life. The idea of a girl throwing everything away because of dick and being turned into an actual pet sounds completely made up porn fantasy until you see it happen in front of you and you are left reconsidering your stance on humanity, but keep in mind that it is very rare. Don't shut yourself off of relationships because of the possibility that such a thing may happen. You are not a clueless NTR cuck, you are very likely to see it coming if it ever even come close to something that outlandish happening. There is a non-zero chance, but it is pretty close to zero so don't be paranoid. Cheaters exist and are among the scum of the earth, but most people are decent.

Going back to the work, this very much feels like a middleschooler persecution fantasy, complete with the cartoonish antagonists and illogical reactions from people all around. I started laughing when I read that "people" came around to vouch for his character yet it very much looked like, at best some people just ignored him, and at worst the whole student body was wholly against him.

Kondo is a joke of an antagonist, it doesn't even feel that good to see him get his comeuppance since he is doing evil things for the sake of it. Ai seems to just be the perfect angel to fall into the lap of Eiji who is also an unremarkable pure hearted guy but somehow you get a whole school to believe that he is an abusive stalker because of popularity? Speaking of, I am sure we are all pretty aware of how bad bullying can get in Japan but I refuse to believe that things would escalate that far, that fast given how little basis there is for it. Not saying that kids need a reason to bully and harass someone but this is absurd, even granting some exaggeration. Endou did not sound that impressive to me, given all the we know, Kondo should have a reputation for being a playboy "homewrecker".

The one character I found kind of interesting is actually Miyuki, as she sheds a light on an usually unexplored aspect of NTR. The perspective of the girl, especially one that is self-aware and remorseful of her actions. Usually, the girls end up being completely morally bankrupt or "mind broken" in such a way that there is no thought about her actions, only dick. I don't remember who said it but I do agree that it is a bit strange how there is no attempt at helping her from the adults in this world. She fucked up, big time, but is she not a teenager who indeed fucked up? Are they all happy to see her spiral into a husk like Eiji was until he got miraculously saved by literally the one person whose circumstances helped him turn his life around when he was about to off himself?

I know that for us readers this is just some tasty schadenfreud (and I can also see her mom writing her off given that she got cheated on and abandoned by her husband) but does nobody in-universe cares that a top student got entangled in such a fucked up thing? I am not advocating for saving her here, but I just find it odd how clearly the story condemns how harshly Eiji got beat down for nothing yet is reveling on a remorseful girl spiraling further and further down to the bottom, just waiting for the rest of her world to crash around her.

Her reputation is fucked, her mom is dead, she won't have a home, she is waiting to be expelled, she may face charges herself for enabling Eiji's bullying, she has no sympathy with anyone anywhere...like what is she supposed to do, just off herself at this point? Again no reason to even talk about Kondo and his dad, they are clearly just moustache twirling vilains who end up in jail (reminder that we are still talking about teenagers here) but what is Miyuki meant to do? There is no avenue for redemption, she cannot apologize, like what is to be done with her? And what can she do with herself? It's like the generic NTR ending where the girl is just a human flashlight and her "thoughts" are only of getting dicked down by whoever
but here not only is she alone but self-aware of her situation so what now?

In conclusion, trashy ragebait absurd revenge fantasy from someone who felt hurt by NTR (don't we all) and I am only waiting to see how the story deals with Miyuki in the end. Please spoil me if there is already a conclusion for her.
 
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Another Peak NTR Revenge Manga theme :meguupog: :meguupog: you will definitely hate Miyuki & Kondo lot after reading this Light Novel Vol. 1 spoiler :haa: (Spoiler Volume 2 can see on Page 2 )

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WARNING : Please Don't Click if you Hate Spoiler

-Part 1: The Birthday Betrayal-
  • Today was Eiji's birthday. He was supposed to go on a date with his girlfriend, Miyuki.
  • But Miyuki texted him, saying she couldn't come because of a club meeting.
  • Eiji felt really sad and confused. Not sure what to do, he took a train far from home.
  • He accidentally walked into an area with lots of love hotels.
  • There, he saw Miyuki! She was holding hands with another guy. It was Kondo – the famous star player of the school soccer team.
  • Shocked, Eiji ran up to them. He asked Miyuki why they were together in that place. He grabbed her hand without thinking.
  • Eiji didn't grab hard, but Miyuki acted like it hurt. Kondo immediately punched Eiji. He yelled, "Don't touch my girlfriend!".
  • Kondo told Miyuki to choose: him or Eiji. He told her to say Eiji was just a creepy stalker who imagined she liked him.
  • Miyuki, scared of losing Kondo, broke up with Eiji right there. She chose Kondo, saying she couldn't live without him.

-Part 2: Rumors and Bullying-
  • The next day, gossip exploded at school. Everyone said Eiji had hurt Miyuki. Photos of her slightly red wrist were all over social media (like X).
  • Because Kondo and Miyuki were popular, everyone believed them. No one believed Eiji, just an ordinary student.
  • Eiji got bullied badly: nasty words written on his desk ("Die stalker!"), his shoes hidden or thrown out, his stuff destroyed.

-(Why Miyuki Cheated)-
  • Miyuki did love Eiji, but their relationship felt boring – just normal dates, not even a kiss.
  • A friend suggested Miyuki talk to Kondo, a senior known for his love life, for advice.
  • At first, Miyuki was unsure about Kondo. But he treated her like a princess, always complimenting her. Slowly, she started liking him.
  • One day, caught up in the moment, Kondo kissed her. Miyuki gave in to him. He took all her "first times." After that, she felt trapped and couldn't leave him.

-Part 3: Kondo's Cruelty & Meeting Ai-
  • When Eiji bumped into Kondo at school, he asked Kondo why he was doing this.
  • Kondo just smiled meanly. He said he loved ruining people's lives. He bragged about a girl in junior high – she was dating her childhood friend (an otaku). Kondo flirted with her, made her dump her boyfriend right in front of him, and loved seeing how broken the guy looked.
  • Kondo dumped that girl after graduation. She was smart before, but being with Kondo messed her up and she fell behind in school. He loved tricking girls into thinking it was real love when it was just a game to him.
  • Hearing this made Eiji feel sick. He almost fainted. The pain was so bad he thought about ending his own life.
  • Looking for a quiet spot at school, he found a first-year student named Ai (famous for being super smart and beautiful) on the roof, about to jump.
  • Seeing Ai like that snapped Eiji out of his own dark thoughts. He rushed to stop her, almost falling off himself.

-Part 4: A New Connection & Miyuki's Regret-
  • After saving Ai, Eiji took her to his house (which was also a restaurant). Ai felt warm and welcome with Eiji's family. Their food cheered her up.
  • Ai realized something: Lots of guys had promised to protect her, but it felt fake. Seeing Eiji risk himself to save someone he just met made her heart flutter. She started falling for him.
  • Ai and Eiji started going to school together. Seeing the school's top girl with the most hated boy shocked everyone. The nasty gossip about Eiji started to fade.
  • Ai's friends asked why she was with Eiji, knowing the rumors. Ai asked them back: "Did you see it happen?" She didn't believe the gossip. Being with Eiji, she knew he wasn't the type to hurt a girl.

-(Miyuki's Jealousy)-
  • Miyuki saw Eiji holding hands with Ai and felt jealous! She still thought of Eiji as hers, forgetting she dumped him.
  • Wanting to apologize, Miyuki went to Eiji's house. She met his mom.
  • Eiji's mom already knew Miyuki was cheating! She'd seen Miyuki holding hands with another guy before Eiji found out. Disappointed, she told Miyuki she wasn't good enough for Eiji and to stay away.
  • Heartbroken, Miyuki went home. To escape her feelings, she called Kondo. Yep, she asked him to come over (while her mom was out) to have sex and forget her pain.

-Part 5: Karma Hits Kondo & Miyuki-
  • Kondo played badly at a university soccer practice. The coach and players said he wasn't good enough. Angry and needing to vent, he called Miyuki to meet.
  • They headed to a love hotel.
  • The otaku guy Kondo hurt in junior high (now friends with Eiji) saw them go in! He took pictures. He also called the police because you have to be 18 to enter love hotels.
  • (This otaku became lonely and distrustful after Kondo ruined his life. In high school, Eiji reached out to him, asking about books. They became friends. Hearing Eiji was hurt by Kondo too made the otaku furious. He followed Kondo, gathering evidence – like photos of Kondo going to Miyuki's house. Seeing them enter the hotel was the proof he needed).
  • The police arrived and arrested Kondo and Miyuki at the hotel.
  • Miyuki's mom was hysterical at the police station. She couldn't believe her daughter cheated on kind Eiji and was caught in a love hotel with another guy. The shock made her faint.

-The Ending (Volume 1)-
  • Kondo and Miyuki finally faced some consequences for their actions.
  • Kondo and his dad thought they could cover everything up. They planned to use Miyuki even more.
  • But they didn't know: The otaku had already sent the photos to the high school soccer coach. If that didn't work, he was ready to post everything online to ruin Kondo and smear his dad's name (who was running for mayor!).
  • Also, the former mayor (a friend of Eiji's dad who loved Eiji like a grandson) was getting involved. He wouldn't forgive anyone who hurt Eiji.
  • And the school? The principal and teachers were ready to punish the bullies and even report them to the police.

Thank you for translating, may NTR lovers go straight to hell

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Thank you, now i can be at peace knowing that those bitches got their Karma, also mc lost a copper and found a diamond
 
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Their first date was half a year after becoming a couple? Seems rather strange.

And so, I… Chose senpai. I thought Eiji would forgive me. I was relying on that.
Forgive what? Cheating? Is she fucking serious?

I love wrecking other people's lives.
Who would even actually say something like that? Actually, it's even worse in the novel: "I'm a psychopath who loves ruining people's lives." This is honestly corny as hell.
 
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I've caught up on the Web novel and would you believe that this story actually leads to
 
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Okay, I read all the spoilers and it is indeed steaming hot garbage. The closest I can come to describing it is that visceral first reaction some of us got the first time we came across a NTR story/plot. The unfairness and cruelty of it can hit like a truck, especially to a teenager/young adult.

As we have seen in some comments, it can legit create some trust issues and make for some emotionally stunted people (guys especially, but do not underestimate how this shit can affect us ladies). Speaking of, while the average NTR doujin is completely braindead in terms of stories, you would be surprised to learn how depraved things can get in real life. The idea of a girl throwing everything away because of dick and being turned into an actual pet sounds completely made up porn fantasy until you see it happen in front of you and you are left reconsidering your stance on humanity, but keep in mind that it is very rare. Don't shut yourself off of relationships because of the possibility that such a thing may happen. You are not a clueless NTR cuck, you are very likely to see it coming if it ever even come close to something that outlandish happening. There is a non-zero chance, but it is pretty close to zero so don't be paranoid. Cheaters exist and are among the scum of the earth, but most people are decent.

Going back to the work, this very much feels like a middleschooler persecution fantasy, complete with the cartoonish antagonists and illogical reactions from people all around. I started laughing when I read that "people" came around to vouch for his character yet it very much looked like, at best some people just ignored him, and at worst the whole student body was wholly against him.

Kondo is a joke of an antagonist, it doesn't even feel that good to see him get his comeuppance since he is doing evil things for the sake of it. Ai seems to just be the perfect angel to fall into the lap of Eiji who is also an unremarkable pure hearted guy but somehow you get a whole school to believe that he is an abusive stalker because of popularity? Speaking of, I am sure we are all pretty aware of how bad bullying can get in Japan but I refuse to believe that things would escalate that far, that fast given how little basis there is for it. Not saying that kids need a reason to bully and harass someone but this is absurd, even granting some exaggeration. Endou did not sound that impressive to me, given all the we know, Kondo should have a reputation for being a playboy "homewrecker".

The one character I found kind of interesting is actually Miyuki, as she sheds a light on an usually unexplored aspect of NTR. The perspective of the girl, especially one that is self-aware and remorseful of her actions. Usually, the girls end up being completely morally bankrupt or "mind broken" in such a way that there is no thought about her actions, only dick. I don't remember who said it but I do agree that it is a bit strange how there is no attempt at helping her from the adults in this world. She fucked up, big time, but is she not a teenager who indeed fucked up? Are they all happy to see her spiral into a husk like Eiji was until he got miraculously saved by literally the one person whose circumstances helped him turn his life around when he was about to off himself?

I know that for us readers this is just some tasty schadenfreud (and I can also see her mom writing her off given that she got cheated on and abandoned by her husband) but does nobody in-universe cares that a top student got entangled in such a fucked up thing? I am not advocating for saving her here, but I just find it odd how clearly the story condemns how harshly Eiji got beat down for nothing yet is reveling on a remorseful girl spiraling further and further down to the bottom, just waiting for the rest of her world to crash around her.

Her reputation is fucked, her mom is dead, she won't have a home, she is waiting to be expelled, she may face charges herself for enabling Eiji's bullying, she has no sympathy with anyone anywhere...like what is she supposed to do, just off herself at this point? Again no reason to even talk about Kondo and his dad, they are clearly just moustache twirling vilains who end up in jail (reminder that we are still talking about teenagers here) but what is Miyuki meant to do? There is no avenue for redemption, she cannot apologize, like what is to be done with her? And what can she do with herself? It's like the generic NTR ending where the girl is just a human flashlight and her "thoughts" are only of getting dicked down by whoever
but here not only is she alone but self-aware of her situation so what now?

In conclusion, trashy ragebait absurd revenge fantasy from someone who felt hurt by NTR (don't we all) and I am only waiting to see how the story deals with Miyuki in the end. Please spoil me if there is already a conclusion for her.
the Web novel hasn't gotten there yet, but every tenth chapter or so revisits her with her life wrecked bemoaning her stupidity. You'd think she had eaten a dozen new-born babies rather than being a kid who had totally messed up. But the immature fan base want to see her skin peeled from her while awake.
 
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Okay, I read all the spoilers and it is indeed steaming hot garbage. The closest I can come to describing it is that visceral first reaction some of us got the first time we came across a NTR story/plot. The unfairness and cruelty of it can hit like a truck, especially to a teenager/young adult.

As we have seen in some comments, it can legit create some trust issues and make for some emotionally stunted people (guys especially, but do not underestimate how this shit can affect us ladies). Speaking of, while the average NTR doujin is completely braindead in terms of stories, you would be surprised to learn how depraved things can get in real life. The idea of a girl throwing everything away because of dick and being turned into an actual pet sounds completely made up porn fantasy until you see it happen in front of you and you are left reconsidering your stance on humanity, but keep in mind that it is very rare. Don't shut yourself off of relationships because of the possibility that such a thing may happen. You are not a clueless NTR cuck, you are very likely to see it coming if it ever even come close to something that outlandish happening. There is a non-zero chance, but it is pretty close to zero so don't be paranoid. Cheaters exist and are among the scum of the earth, but most people are decent.

Going back to the work, this very much feels like a middleschooler persecution fantasy, complete with the cartoonish antagonists and illogical reactions from people all around. I started laughing when I read that "people" came around to vouch for his character yet it very much looked like, at best some people just ignored him, and at worst the whole student body was wholly against him.

Kondo is a joke of an antagonist, it doesn't even feel that good to see him get his comeuppance since he is doing evil things for the sake of it. Ai seems to just be the perfect angel to fall into the lap of Eiji who is also an unremarkable pure hearted guy but somehow you get a whole school to believe that he is an abusive stalker because of popularity? Speaking of, I am sure we are all pretty aware of how bad bullying can get in Japan but I refuse to believe that things would escalate that far, that fast given how little basis there is for it. Not saying that kids need a reason to bully and harass someone but this is absurd, even granting some exaggeration. Endou did not sound that impressive to me, given all the we know, Kondo should have a reputation for being a playboy "homewrecker".

The one character I found kind of interesting is actually Miyuki, as she sheds a light on an usually unexplored aspect of NTR. The perspective of the girl, especially one that is self-aware and remorseful of her actions. Usually, the girls end up being completely morally bankrupt or "mind broken" in such a way that there is no thought about her actions, only dick. I don't remember who said it but I do agree that it is a bit strange how there is no attempt at helping her from the adults in this world. She fucked up, big time, but is she not a teenager who indeed fucked up? Are they all happy to see her spiral into a husk like Eiji was until he got miraculously saved by literally the one person whose circumstances helped him turn his life around when he was about to off himself?

I know that for us readers this is just some tasty schadenfreud (and I can also see her mom writing her off given that she got cheated on and abandoned by her husband) but does nobody in-universe cares that a top student got entangled in such a fucked up thing? I am not advocating for saving her here, but I just find it odd how clearly the story condemns how harshly Eiji got beat down for nothing yet is reveling on a remorseful girl spiraling further and further down to the bottom, just waiting for the rest of her world to crash around her.

Her reputation is fucked, her mom is dead, she won't have a home, she is waiting to be expelled, she may face charges herself for enabling Eiji's bullying, she has no sympathy with anyone anywhere...like what is she supposed to do, just off herself at this point? Again no reason to even talk about Kondo and his dad, they are clearly just moustache twirling vilains who end up in jail (reminder that we are still talking about teenagers here) but what is Miyuki meant to do? There is no avenue for redemption, she cannot apologize, like what is to be done with her? And what can she do with herself? It's like the generic NTR ending where the girl is just a human flashlight and her "thoughts" are only of getting dicked down by whoever
but here not only is she alone but self-aware of her situation so what now?

In conclusion, trashy ragebait absurd revenge fantasy from someone who felt hurt by NTR (don't we all) and I am only waiting to see how the story deals with Miyuki in the end. Please spoil me if there is already a conclusion for her.
the Web novel hasn't gotten there yet, but every tenth chapter or so revisits her with her life wrecked bemoaning her stupidity. You'd think she had eaten a dozen new-born babies rather than being a kid who had totally messed up. But the immature fan base want to see her skin peeled from her while awake.


Yeah I know why we see this wish fulfillment story, but I think Miyuki's fate is so over the top? Like is the author's endgame would be she become a homeless gyaru prostitute pregnant with a kid while hooked on drugs for the fanbase to be happy? Does no one think oh maybe Kondo forced/manipulated her or something? The teachers didn't care because she is already 100% guilty?
 
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Another Peak NTR Revenge Manga theme :meguupog: :meguupog: you will definitely hate Miyuki & Kondo lot after reading this Light Novel Vol. 1 spoiler :haa: (Spoiler Volume 2 can see on Page 2 )

9w1vnt.jpg


WARNING : Please Don't Click if you Hate Spoiler

-Part 1: The Birthday Betrayal-
  • Today was Eiji's birthday. He was supposed to go on a date with his girlfriend, Miyuki.
  • But Miyuki texted him, saying she couldn't come because of a club meeting.
  • Eiji felt really sad and confused. Not sure what to do, he took a train far from home.
  • He accidentally walked into an area with lots of love hotels.
  • There, he saw Miyuki! She was holding hands with another guy. It was Kondo – the famous star player of the school soccer team.
  • Shocked, Eiji ran up to them. He asked Miyuki why they were together in that place. He grabbed her hand without thinking.
  • Eiji didn't grab hard, but Miyuki acted like it hurt. Kondo immediately punched Eiji. He yelled, "Don't touch my girlfriend!".
  • Kondo told Miyuki to choose: him or Eiji. He told her to say Eiji was just a creepy stalker who imagined she liked him.
  • Miyuki, scared of losing Kondo, broke up with Eiji right there. She chose Kondo, saying she couldn't live without him.

-Part 2: Rumors and Bullying-
  • The next day, gossip exploded at school. Everyone said Eiji had hurt Miyuki. Photos of her slightly red wrist were all over social media (like X).
  • Because Kondo and Miyuki were popular, everyone believed them. No one believed Eiji, just an ordinary student.
  • Eiji got bullied badly: nasty words written on his desk ("Die stalker!"), his shoes hidden or thrown out, his stuff destroyed.

-(Why Miyuki Cheated)-
  • Miyuki did love Eiji, but their relationship felt boring – just normal dates, not even a kiss.
  • A friend suggested Miyuki talk to Kondo, a senior known for his love life, for advice.
  • At first, Miyuki was unsure about Kondo. But he treated her like a princess, always complimenting her. Slowly, she started liking him.
  • One day, caught up in the moment, Kondo kissed her. Miyuki gave in to him. He took all her "first times." After that, she felt trapped and couldn't leave him.

-Part 3: Kondo's Cruelty & Meeting Ai-
  • When Eiji bumped into Kondo at school, he asked Kondo why he was doing this.
  • Kondo just smiled meanly. He said he loved ruining people's lives. He bragged about a girl in junior high – she was dating her childhood friend (an otaku). Kondo flirted with her, made her dump her boyfriend right in front of him, and loved seeing how broken the guy looked.
  • Kondo dumped that girl after graduation. She was smart before, but being with Kondo messed her up and she fell behind in school. He loved tricking girls into thinking it was real love when it was just a game to him.
  • Hearing this made Eiji feel sick. He almost fainted. The pain was so bad he thought about ending his own life.
  • Looking for a quiet spot at school, he found a first-year student named Ai (famous for being super smart and beautiful) on the roof, about to jump.
  • Seeing Ai like that snapped Eiji out of his own dark thoughts. He rushed to stop her, almost falling off himself.

-Part 4: A New Connection & Miyuki's Regret-
  • After saving Ai, Eiji took her to his house (which was also a restaurant). Ai felt warm and welcome with Eiji's family. Their food cheered her up.
  • Ai realized something: Lots of guys had promised to protect her, but it felt fake. Seeing Eiji risk himself to save someone he just met made her heart flutter. She started falling for him.
  • Ai and Eiji started going to school together. Seeing the school's top girl with the most hated boy shocked everyone. The nasty gossip about Eiji started to fade.
  • Ai's friends asked why she was with Eiji, knowing the rumors. Ai asked them back: "Did you see it happen?" She didn't believe the gossip. Being with Eiji, she knew he wasn't the type to hurt a girl.

-(Miyuki's Jealousy)-
  • Miyuki saw Eiji holding hands with Ai and felt jealous! She still thought of Eiji as hers, forgetting she dumped him.
  • Wanting to apologize, Miyuki went to Eiji's house. She met his mom.
  • Eiji's mom already knew Miyuki was cheating! She'd seen Miyuki holding hands with another guy before Eiji found out. Disappointed, she told Miyuki she wasn't good enough for Eiji and to stay away.
  • Heartbroken, Miyuki went home. To escape her feelings, she called Kondo. Yep, she asked him to come over (while her mom was out) to have sex and forget her pain.

-Part 5: Karma Hits Kondo & Miyuki-
  • Kondo played badly at a university soccer practice. The coach and players said he wasn't good enough. Angry and needing to vent, he called Miyuki to meet.
  • They headed to a love hotel.
  • The otaku guy Kondo hurt in junior high (now friends with Eiji) saw them go in! He took pictures. He also called the police because you have to be 18 to enter love hotels.
  • (This otaku became lonely and distrustful after Kondo ruined his life. In high school, Eiji reached out to him, asking about books. They became friends. Hearing Eiji was hurt by Kondo too made the otaku furious. He followed Kondo, gathering evidence – like photos of Kondo going to Miyuki's house. Seeing them enter the hotel was the proof he needed).
  • The police arrived and arrested Kondo and Miyuki at the hotel.
  • Miyuki's mom was hysterical at the police station. She couldn't believe her daughter cheated on kind Eiji and was caught in a love hotel with another guy. The shock made her faint.

-The Ending (Volume 1)-
  • Kondo and Miyuki finally faced some consequences for their actions.
  • Kondo and his dad thought they could cover everything up. They planned to use Miyuki even more.
  • But they didn't know: The otaku had already sent the photos to the high school soccer coach. If that didn't work, he was ready to post everything online to ruin Kondo and smear his dad's name (who was running for mayor!).
  • Also, the former mayor (a friend of Eiji's dad who loved Eiji like a grandson) was getting involved. He wouldn't forgive anyone who hurt Eiji.
  • And the school? The principal and teachers were ready to punish the bullies and even report them to the police.

Thank you for translating, may NTR lovers go straight to hell

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The post I was looking for, thanks ooh all-knowing!
 
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Okay, I read all the spoilers and it is indeed steaming hot garbage. The closest I can come to describing it is that visceral first reaction some of us got the first time we came across a NTR story/plot. The unfairness and cruelty of it can hit like a truck, especially to a teenager/young adult.

As we have seen in some comments, it can legit create some trust issues and make for some emotionally stunted people (guys especially, but do not underestimate how this shit can affect us ladies). Speaking of, while the average NTR doujin is completely braindead in terms of stories, you would be surprised to learn how depraved things can get in real life. The idea of a girl throwing everything away because of dick and being turned into an actual pet sounds completely made up porn fantasy until you see it happen in front of you and you are left reconsidering your stance on humanity, but keep in mind that it is very rare. Don't shut yourself off of relationships because of the possibility that such a thing may happen. You are not a clueless NTR cuck, you are very likely to see it coming if it ever even come close to something that outlandish happening. There is a non-zero chance, but it is pretty close to zero so don't be paranoid. Cheaters exist and are among the scum of the earth, but most people are decent.

Going back to the work, this very much feels like a middleschooler persecution fantasy, complete with the cartoonish antagonists and illogical reactions from people all around. I started laughing when I read that "people" came around to vouch for his character yet it very much looked like, at best some people just ignored him, and at worst the whole student body was wholly against him.

Kondo is a joke of an antagonist, it doesn't even feel that good to see him get his comeuppance since he is doing evil things for the sake of it. Ai seems to just be the perfect angel to fall into the lap of Eiji who is also an unremarkable pure hearted guy but somehow you get a whole school to believe that he is an abusive stalker because of popularity? Speaking of, I am sure we are all pretty aware of how bad bullying can get in Japan but I refuse to believe that things would escalate that far, that fast given how little basis there is for it. Not saying that kids need a reason to bully and harass someone but this is absurd, even granting some exaggeration. Endou did not sound that impressive to me, given all the we know, Kondo should have a reputation for being a playboy "homewrecker".

The one character I found kind of interesting is actually Miyuki, as she sheds a light on an usually unexplored aspect of NTR. The perspective of the girl, especially one that is self-aware and remorseful of her actions. Usually, the girls end up being completely morally bankrupt or "mind broken" in such a way that there is no thought about her actions, only dick. I don't remember who said it but I do agree that it is a bit strange how there is no attempt at helping her from the adults in this world. She fucked up, big time, but is she not a teenager who indeed fucked up? Are they all happy to see her spiral into a husk like Eiji was until he got miraculously saved by literally the one person whose circumstances helped him turn his life around when he was about to off himself?

I know that for us readers this is just some tasty schadenfreud (and I can also see her mom writing her off given that she got cheated on and abandoned by her husband) but does nobody in-universe cares that a top student got entangled in such a fucked up thing? I am not advocating for saving her here, but I just find it odd how clearly the story condemns how harshly Eiji got beat down for nothing yet is reveling on a remorseful girl spiraling further and further down to the bottom, just waiting for the rest of her world to crash around her.

Her reputation is fucked, her mom is dead, she won't have a home, she is waiting to be expelled, she may face charges herself for enabling Eiji's bullying, she has no sympathy with anyone anywhere...like what is she supposed to do, just off herself at this point? Again no reason to even talk about Kondo and his dad, they are clearly just moustache twirling vilains who end up in jail (reminder that we are still talking about teenagers here) but what is Miyuki meant to do? There is no avenue for redemption, she cannot apologize, like what is to be done with her? And what can she do with herself? It's like the generic NTR ending where the girl is just a human flashlight and her "thoughts" are only of getting dicked down by whoever
but here not only is she alone but self-aware of her situation so what now?

In conclusion, trashy ragebait absurd revenge fantasy from someone who felt hurt by NTR (don't we all) and I am only waiting to see how the story deals with Miyuki in the end. Please spoil me if there is already a conclusion for her.
honestly you r right about it, but i cant do empathy with miyuki no matter how hard i try even after reading spoilers.
yeah she is young and all, she is also self aware but to deserve redemption or something she should of take action when she saw the bullying. but she chose to cry only bc she cant take responsibility for her action of choosing the dick and afraid of getting the same bullying as he did if she come clean. at this point since its not even real life i cant have any empathy for her as a reader. honestly i myself see some girls choosing dick over love irl and it disgusts me, most of the time this doesnt happen bc of size difference or something like that (bc thats biologically not make any sense maybe if you make yourself believe it ''it will feel better if its bigger''). like it happened in this story its matter of ''who is quicker''. especially for people who doesnt have relationship experience, first love bomb, make her feel she never have felt before with someone else get her to the bed once you dck her down its over, all of the ethic, rationality any sign of mind is working are gone bc they become dopamine slaves. its one of the worst addictions honestly and people mostly regret addictions after some years (5-10 years is enough). from my experience real life has more wild, disgusting situations than we all expect.
 
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Their first date was half a year after becoming a couple? Seems rather strange.


Forgive what? Cheating? Is she fucking serious?


Who would even actually say something like that? Actually, it's even worse in the novel: "I'm a psychopath who loves ruining people's lives." This is honestly corny as hell.
I would be a lot more inclined to take this more seriously if Kondo was even slightly less of a joke. I can't think of how you write a compelling villain with his motivations but at the same time I cannot believe that he does not have a well-known reputation for fucking with people's relationships like that.

He is such a high profile guy at the school and in the whole city given his father's position, and he is so open about the shit he does, there is no way people wouldn't at least have rumors going around about him.

The fact he's been doing this for years, to the point that another whole ass girl feeds him other girls she doesn't like but no one knows that's a thing AND they believe that he was saving a girl from an abusive stalker ex when the dude in question looks like he could never hurt a fly even if he wanted?

Dang, the more I think of it, the less it makes sense, and feels like the author just needed to set up things so they could dive into the revenge fantasy part as soon and as hard as possible...
 
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bro, pretty sure you stay cooped in the house instead of socializing, you're getting all these fears from fiction. there are more good people than bad. i hope you'll find your peace before its too late
I'm employed!

But everyone around me makes me feel suspicious, especially fake/prank romance. Even I don't have my peace, I still can defend myself, unlike when I was in high school (about being bullies).
 
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Yes, those are all good reasons for not moving on. My point was simply that having his girlfriend dump him was not enough reason.

Also, I'm not sure if you're truly obsessive or just trolling
Yes, those are all good reasons for not moving on. My point was simply that having his girlfriend dump him was not enough reason.

Also, I'm not sure if you're truly obsessive or just trolling.

Yes, those are all good reasons for not moving on. My point was simply that having his girlfriend dump him was not enough reason.

Also, I'm not sure if you're truly obsessive or just trolling.
Well, being obsessive of thinking of justice for the NTRed MC, not trolling!
 
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This is hilariously bad. It's like the author is a teenager who read a couple of NTR stories and got angry, so he decided to write his own version where God himself helps the MC and everyone opposite to him gets punished beyond his wildest dreams. I mean come on.
So what?! Most NTR Doujins have NO REVENGE! The real author must make the protagonist development better, NOT LET THE ANTAGONIST WIN IN THE END.

Because NTR Ending MAKES THE PLOT BULLS**T! 😡
 
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  • The next day, gossip exploded at school. Everyone said Eiji had hurt Miyuki. Photos of her slightly red wrist were all over social media (like X).
  • Because Kondo and Miyuki were popular, everyone believed them. No one believed Eiji, just an ordinary student.
  • Eiji got bullied badly: nasty words written on his desk ("Die stalker!"), his shoes hidden or thrown out, his stuff destroyed
Is the whole school a fcking simps.? Why are they acting like K-pop fans doing a witch-hunt..?
★ Media called Ai the "Miracle Child," but jealous classmates spread awful rumors: "She lived because her mom died for her."
★ Heartbroken and bullied, Ai moved to a faraway high school. Alone in her despair, she almost jumped off the school roof—but Eiji saved her, risking his own life. His kindness made her fall for him.
Wait, what.? Since when is a mother saving her child a bad thing.?
The more I read the spoiler, the more I raised my eyebrows. The logic behind how and why everything happened just doesn't compute for me..
Oh well, maybe Japan(or just the author, really) has a different experience/culture. I dunno...

PS: kinda funny how everyone(most) is more angry about the "NTR" than the bullying, smh...
 
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honestly you r right about it, but i cant do empathy with miyuki no matter how hard i try even after reading spoilers. yeah she is young and all, she is also self aware but to deserve redemption or something she should of take action when she saw the bullying. but she chose to cry only bc she cant take responsibility for her action of choosing the dick and afraid of getting the same bullying as he did if she come clean. at this point since its not even real life i cant have any empathy for her as a reader. honestly i myself see some girls choosing dick over love irl and it disgusts me, most of the time this doesnt happen bc of size difference or something like that (bc thats biologically not make any sense maybe if you make yourself believe it ''it will feel better if its bigger''). like it happened in this story its matter of ''who is quicker''. especially for people who doesnt have relationship experience, first love bomb, make her feel she never have felt before with someone else get her to the bed once you dck her down its over, all of the ethic, rationality any sign of mind is working are gone bc they become dopamine slaves. its one of the worst addictions honestly and people mostly regret addictions after some years (5-10 years is enough). from my experience real life has more wild, disgusting situations than we all expect.
a few points... Firstly, MC hasn't even kissed her after six months of being in a relationship. He has been a spineless wimp. So you can forgive a girl for wondering if she is attractive at this point. Then she is seduced and manipulated by an experienced playa. Then she truly messes up. But now we need to decide what redemption looks like. She will never get the MC back, she will probably be expelled from the school. She has lost all her friends, her mother hates what she did and is now only supporting her basic existence. Isn't that enough? She will have to start again elsewhere. She has learnt a very real lesson. Why does she still get hounded by the readers?
 
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a few points... Firstly, MC hasn't even kissed her after six months of being in a relationship. He has been a spineless wimp. So you can forgive a girl for wondering if she is attractive at this point. Then she is seduced and manipulated by an experienced playa. Then she truly messes up. But now we need to decide what redemption looks like. She will never get the MC back, she will probably be expelled from the school. She has lost all her friends, her mother hates what she did and is now only supporting her basic existence. Isn't that enough? She will have to start again elsewhere. She has learnt a very real lesson. Why does she still get hounded by the readers?
Umm excuse me but why do you wait kissing from mc? Isnt it something to do you both agree before doing (well that shit just stole her lips that doesnt count), it just means she says he was boring but it shows she didnt try anything too.
And honestly i cant give my limited empathy to a fictional cheater character, even author gave up about redemption for her not my problem. People are free to want a redemption for her but it wont come from me bc im not interested, it could have been different if she chose to come clean before it escalated to the point he wanted to die. You all are forgetting about the fact he almost died bc of her since mc is fine later on but that doesnt mean it changes what she did in my eyes. You can cheat its fine, you can just fck his heart but if you fck his life completely too and dont take responsibility for what u did, there will be no empathy from anyone. Am i harsh? I agree that she is kind of a victim too but its %30 her fault for almost killing him and she didnt even go to jail? If we count her as victim then that shitty guy also a victim of someone else since he get manipulated. Maybe bc she finally confessed what happened they didnt held her as guilty but i cant forget the fact she almost killed him. That point is the most important imo.
 
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