Shokei Flag no Akuyaku Kizoku ni Tensei Shita ga, Shinitakunai node Yami Mahou o Kiwamete Heroine-tachi o Sukuimasu - Ch. 3.2

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I mean, we know from chapter 1, page 1 that they're totally fine with each other, so this is just strange and effectively useless ending page...
A large part of storytelling is the journey. We know that eventually they're fine with one another, but we don't know what brought them together; of course, this is slop at its finest, so it'll probably be solved in a chapter or two at most, but it still serves to keep the reader vaguely interested enough in finding out to keep reading.
 
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They made up yet at the next moment she catched him cheating. Why do I hear knife sounds suddenly? :shamihuh:
 
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It'd be interesting if the sudden yandere turn was a side effect of dark healing.
I don't think that is so much to healing I think that nature of her has been buried for a while I mean even after all the horrible things he did I think she would have forgived him if he had just come to face for personally instead of running away
 
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I don't think that is so much to healing I think that nature of her has been buried for a while I mean even after all the horrible things he did I think she would have forgived him if he had just come to face for personally instead of running away
They'll probably rescope the original deaths at the womens hands, that they were always yandere, and overwhelmingly pissed he never chose them, and went for the "If I can't have him, nobody can!"
 
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Out of the frying pan and into the heart of Chernobyl Reactor 4 on April 26, 1986 1:23 AM local time.
 
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unless the author reveals that the healing has brainwashing side effects I'm about to drop this title for just being too half-assed and delusional 😅

can writing like this even survive 20chapters before getting axed??
 
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OK, so what just happened at the end?

I thought this was Diabolo's atonement story? Is it about to become Ciel's villain origin story? 😂
 
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I mean, yeah, it was obvious she'd forgive him instantly. What really bugged me is the maid getting off scotch-free, even if the original Diabolo was literally Satan.

That being said, Marron is in grave danger, isn't she?
Yandere acquired. And as she said, she would have forgiven him easily; we saw that in every flashback. It was literally the servants working against her desire (although technically for her own good, given who the real body owner was ingame)
Yeah, about that... she literally didn't want to talk to him when he first came to her and threatened to kill him if he came again, so this easy forgiveness seems to be a bullshit.
 
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Yeah, about that... she literally didn't want to talk to him when he first came to her and threatened to kill him if he came again, so this easy forgiveness seems to be a bullshit.
I'm actually not sure about that. We don't hear her exact words in chapter 1, only what the maid claims to be repeating. When the maid says it, we only see the maids face, so we don't know whether she was still standing next to her, or if she walked up to the gate so she wouldn't know the lie. We know the servants have all directly stated that they will never forgive him, so it's not impossible she lied about the message, that the real message was the same as we later heard from her own mouth that she only wanted an apology. Chapter 2, she's disappointed he hasn't come back, which seems out of place if her words really were threats to kill him like the maid stated in chapter 1.
 

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