I think there's an error on page 6 (or 149): in the last two bubbles there are the same lines as the last 2 of the next page, but in the first case they don't really fit. Sorry if I'm wrong.
Yeah, but at the moment he almost seems to be written to be a bit unlikeable, so I was confused. I guess he will get a good dose of character development? I don't really like him at the moment, but I guess he's not a bad guy? I'm not even sure about my opinions...