I'm sorry, totally forgot to answer xD If you think yours work is better, then I can't find any problems, right? I Will definitely read your work later. So again, if you will do it better or you think you can do it better, just do. I can't find any problem here? BTW I liked this kind of...
I totally disagree. This person is trying her/his/they best. If you don't like it = don't read it and stop blame. I'll respect the translator motivation and will to translate it for us. P.S. Thank you for your work :headpat: