Im liking the concept and art so far, especially with Noel, tho the dialogue/writing definitely feels a little clunky, even in the raws. It's like we're speedrunning through the setup to get to some conflict, but I feel like a couple more chapters showing the mc learning her abilities, etc...
I kinda wish we got more time with each character before the next showed up. Obviously they'll get fleshed out from here, but still feels a little fast; tho ig it makes sense in terms of the story?
@ladyharhar @mimisan This is after the Eastern Empire war, but before the Temma war (if it will even happen. It hasn't happened in the light novel yet, and the light novel is canon, so...)
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