I'm liking it out of wholesomeness and cutesy-ness but I can't help but cringe at how their relationship with each other as a 'married' couple. Someone "hit the nail in the head" when they said it's like they're grade schoolers. I think that's the thing I suspend my disbelief the most, how they...
Damn, good writing must be really sparse these days that people don't recognize good character development and consistency.
He spent all his previous life thinking he was a failure. Now that his actions led up to another failure, the feeling is all too familiar for him. It's consistent with his...