Both this TL and the one you can find on Tritinia's site are ESL slop, possibly even MTL, and people even paid Tritinia.
If you're not good enough to TL, just let it be.
I guess it's kinda late to ask this but did you drop this for good? Your TL was always such high quality and I appreciated that, the new TL is dogshit.
What's the point in dumping 3 chapters at once after 3 months of inactivity?
Anyways, this is getting a real TL now, so you don't have to bother with MTL anymore. Thank you for your efforts in the meantime :)
What is "Because I wasn't the one to pick out the ring..." supposed to mean? And then the sentence after "It makes no sense if you just tell me exactly what to do with it".
Is he contemplating the fact that he might have picked something Luna doesn't like? She does call it lame in the SFX too...
Why is the girl changing the room temperature on page 10? It's parallel to the boy picking up tissues so does it have anything to do with how women masturbate? I don't get it.