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Missing 's' on page 18: "ome materials"

I was thinking either that, or whether the person seeing knows their form when alive (dad saw the dog's photo, miko knows dad and there was some instances of recently deceased). Another option is how strongly the person who died is remembered, with François being dog-like back then because he...

Don't abbreviate it like that lol

"It's tough being a womankind" Either drop the "kind" or change it to be like "it's tough being part of womankind" or something

"Your" on page 2, "angle" in the first chapter... I don't know if they're typos or intentional misspellings, but gotta point them out just in case

No, like, wouldn't it be "sugar papa" instead of "super papa"?

P13: two reasons (for) P17: it might be just me not understanding the reference, but isn't it sugar (daddy)? For the compensated dating joke

P9: "just because it's ragnarok's say so" reads a bit weirdly. Maybe "just because ragnarok says so"

P17: normally you'd word it "light and darkness"

P4: spactial isn't a word P5: there's a space between tanimoto and -kun P8: maybe the bubble placement is just weird but it feels like the coaches' bubbles are switched P16: appreciate what?

Page 8: in an instant

P4 now

Page 4,5: disappointed Page 5: they

Page 11: *your next opponent

Page 10: a woman. Taekwondo. Page 15: its members Page 16: preparation (or preparations are)