This really feels like a .1 chapter... Why end like that when we all know he'll just say that she has to say those things herself?
It his even qualified to be called " creating suspense" or a "cliffhanger"?
I've been thinking about this... You know when you're just scrolling through Tik Tok, and then there's a "revenge story" that's clearly written by AI? You know, the sorts of where the family or the SO disregards the "writer", and then he cuts all financial support and they come back complaining...
I actually forgot this existed... Saw this and got curious to how they were going to solve him being able to hear her having sex, but it ended up just her dumping whoever she was hooking up with.
Dude... No offense to the scanlators, you are not to blame as it probably releases like this, right? But... This is nonsense. 9 pages? what the actual fuck
Ah, the classic "a smart character is only as smart as the author".
I still think MC is retarded for not finding out when the friend finds out instantly, and FMC is kind of a bitch for lying until now.