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3 chapters in it's really cliche and not in a good way. Probably really good if your just after some junk food to eat but it's just nothing good not even mediocre it's just cliche.

A very generic premise that actually avoids being as generic as it shows itself to be? While the first 3 or 4 chapters ain't great the story very early did show a different pov and while I'd have liked the mc going to the guild and reporting his team abandoning him he didn't cos the author is...

So I'd only attempted the first chapter and I didn't even get like 6? Pages I have so many complaints bout the tl/pr/editing it's just god damn awful. Like the first chapter on that awful comiket or whatever is free so go look at its first 6 pages to compare how badly they are done. I don't have...

This would in ironically be a really good plot development

This chapter is extremely obvious bout setting up either a growth moment for the chick or a reconciliation for the mc and the chick after the fallout.

This feels like the generic harem shrine story, no joke, I'm confused alot by the comments above cos again, it feels so very "follow the formula" to the tee that it's just plain.

The power levels are constantly in flux if you compare the first fight to say chapter 80 fights, you'll notice that a powerful mc is actually weak as hell but nope suddenly he's super duper strong again. Ugh.