Recent content by chiliehead

The collateral damage of random civilians is off the charts really.

That inner conflict felt a little undercooked, very little build up for this resolution.

I think this one is closer to a Bulette minus the digging, the Tarrasque is the giant one they are hunting for.

After giving criticism last time, I have to give props. This reads a lot smoother, even if the issue of plural-s on singular words persists. Another thing to point out is the typesetting. You sometimes touch the margins with some words in speech bubbles and especially text boxes, which makes...

The 3rd person singular for "to have" is "has" and you only need to add an "s" to words if they're plural. I strongly recommend a quality checker and a different proofreader to catch the typos and poor grammar, especially if you're not native. The mistakes are frequent and consistent. For a...

I'm sorry but this is really close to unreadable, did the group lose their translator? If you MTL, it does not mean you are not allowed to edit the output. Stuff like "not inheriting the house" and then "inheriting the house" should tell you in context which one is wrong. Same for the complete...

So we skipped over most of the guerilla action to have multiway standoff inside and people getting themselves into needless danger.

It's really too bad for both of them, that they seem to attract (water) spirits.

Amnesia angle would be tormenting him so much, forgetting about Namehata and she has to do it all again, knowing about Mizutani. I thought maybe he'll be paraplegic and actually marries one of them, forever to be licked.

First of, thanks for translating. But that ending was the worst way to deal with the axe. Suddenly having a whole ass Phantom Troupe show up and start killing out of nowhere, this would have needed like 20 volumes to actually give everyone time to get established and that was a bad idea in...

A proper gambling arc is always good, let's see if they pull it off.

That's a lot of people to introduce before the penultimate chapter. And they're fighting the cartel for some very convoluted reason.

They do resemble each other a bit, but as long as we don't get some distinctive moles it might just be the art style. Fuko also has a somewhat similar face. Maybe being good with blades is genetic though.

So far we see a lot of shattered assumptions and how first impressions impact and change relationships. I wonder if that is part of the bigger picture of growing through Kyudo or just the beginning of Santa coming out of his shell and cracking the egg to revolutionize the world of his feelings...

Ghh ...