The translation is solid, but the cleaning and redrawing could use some improvement. I also noticed some typos on the scans, but no worries, if you’re planning to continue this, putting in a bit more care to the end product would go a long way.
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I honestly don’t know how to feel after reading all 8 chapter, a mix of frustration amid the otherwise cozy manga atmosphere? Something about it just doesn’t sit right with me, like im having a Domestic Girlfriend déjà vu. Guess I’ll wait for more updates.